Forum
Community Forum
Today's Posts
FAQ & Rules
Members List

Writing
Writing Forum
Recent Posts
Critique Guidelines

Groups
YWO Social Groups
Facebook
Myspace

Chat
 
YWA

Register

Store
Support YWO
YWO Merchandise
The Book Despository
Amazon.com (US)
Amazon.co.uk (UK)
Amazon.ca (Canada)

SBS Mag


Reply
 
Thread Tools
Old 08-30-2010, 05:24 PM View Post #1 (Link) Hi!
pockylove (Offline)
Literary Newbie
 
pockylove's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2010
Location: Ontario
Posts: 2
Points: 6.17
Times Thanked: 0
hello YWO! As you can see, I'm new here and the reason i joined is because I would like to be critique on my short stories. My english marks at school aren't very good so i want to write stories to fix my grammer mistakes! It's nice to meet you all!
  Reply With Quote
Old 08-30-2010, 05:29 PM View Post #2 (Link)
Clarissa (Offline)
Literary Artist
 
Clarissa's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: Having breakfast at Tiffany's
Posts: 282
Points: 30
Times Thanked: 39
Hai there

Short stories, eh? What genre of short stories?

And no problem about the grammar mistakes. A lot of us would sell our souls to critique the grammar stuff... So if you need a critique lemme know, okay?

Other than that, what music do you like?
What do you like to read?
Socks or no socks?

Also, follow the rules and regulations (like caps on the right letters etc)

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/critiques.php <---- Critique guidelines

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/rules.php <--- Site rules.

Okay then. Bai for now Let me know if you need anything else.
__________________
One flew East, One flew West,
One flew over the Cuckoo's nest

Truth is Beauty and Beauty is Truth.
(Keats)

When you've looked and looked, and have found nothing better to do: Read it and weep
  Reply With Quote
Old 08-30-2010, 06:05 PM View Post #3 (Link)
Rose (Offline)
Crit Trash Collector
 
Rose's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2010
Location: Beirut
Posts: 720
Points: 30
Times Thanked: 454
Originally Posted by Clarissa View Post
Hai there

Short stories, eh? What genre of short stories?

And no problem about the grammar mistakes. A lot of us would sell our souls to critique the grammar stuff... So if you need a critique lemme know, okay?

Other than that, what music do you like?
What do you like to read?
Socks or no socks?

Also, follow the rules and regulations (like caps on the right letters etc)

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/critiques.php <---- Critique guidelines

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/rules.php <--- Site rules.

Okay then. Bai for now Let me know if you need anything else.
I'm guessing it's Post in the Newbie Zone Before Rose Day, eh Clar?

Anyway, welcome to the site, PL. We have a member called Pockyfreak here. I think you're gonna like each other.

If you need anything, feel free to ask me at anytime. info.Rose@youngwritersonline.net (Yup, my profile. xD) I think I should have this link in my signature. Oh well...

Favorite color?

Favorite sandwich?

Favorite juice?

Fuschia or violet?

Sandals or converse?

Hope you enjoy your stay here.

Good luck hating Twilight.

\/ Peace... and... I'm out.
__________________
Das ist das ende


  Reply With Quote
Old 08-30-2010, 07:53 PM View Post #4 (Link)
Alice Glitterhorn (Offline)
Crit Sheriff
 
Alice Glitterhorn's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: Unicorn Valley
Posts: 74
Points: 23.42
Times Thanked: 76
Wazzup, mah homie-g! Youza gonna lyke it here.

*is shot*

Welcome.
__________________
Spoiler:
Originally Posted by Caleb
when I hear the word poet

I think of you naked, rimbaud drinking, and how lovely my hair is


They sailed away, for a year and a day,
To the land where the bong-tree grows;
And there in a wood a Piggy-wig stood,
With a ring at the end of his nose,

Word Count: 10000/50000
  Reply With Quote
Old 08-30-2010, 11:06 PM View Post #5 (Link)
Majyk (Offline)
Freelance Writer
 
Majyk's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 1,463
Points: 30
Times Thanked: 356
Originally Posted by Rose View Post
I'm guessing it's Post in the Newbie Zone Before Rose Day, eh Clar?
You're forgetting that before you did it, that was my job.

Anyway, welcome to YWO. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. Aaaaaand... that's all I have to say.
__________________
.


A person who never made a mistake never tried anything new.
Albert Einstein


.
  Reply With Quote
Old 08-31-2010, 03:35 AM View Post #6 (Link)
Anira (Offline)
Scholarly Apprentice
 
Anira's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 119
Points: 30
Times Thanked: 5
Hi and welcome to YWO. I look forward to reading some of your stuff.
  Reply With Quote
Old 09-01-2010, 09:22 PM View Post #7 (Link)
pockylove (Offline)
Literary Newbie
 
pockylove's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2010
Location: Ontario
Posts: 2
Points: 6.17
Times Thanked: 0
thank you! i think i'll like it here very much

oh and i write short stories based on how i feel and when and ideal pops in my head. so i'm not very sure...
  Reply With Quote
Old 09-01-2010, 09:40 PM View Post #8 (Link)
ManyIdeas (Offline)
Scholarly Apprentice
 
ManyIdeas's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2010
Location: England
Posts: 115
Points: 20
Times Thanked: 8
Nice to meet you XD If you need any critiquing, just PM and I'll see what I can do
__________________
"Something here doesn't make sense. Let's go and poke it with a stick."- The Doctor
"Yes, before you ask, I like Matt Smith!"
  Reply With Quote
Reply
Thread Tools

 


All times are GMT. The time now is 02:11 PM.
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7 - Copyright ©2000 - 2018, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
All writing Copyright © its author(s). All other material Copyright © 2007-2012 Young Writers Online unless otherwise specified.
Managed by Andrew Kukwa (Andy) and Shaun Duke (Shaun) from The World in the Satin Bag. Design by HTWoRKS.