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Old 12-31-2007, 11:45 PM View Post #21 (Link)
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well thats good to know because my new years resolution ((not like I was going to hold it up or anything)) was that I was going to create less awkward moments, but now that I see that they are accepted here ((case and point this post)) I think I'll scratch that and go onto something more... I don't know?? do-able?
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Old 12-31-2007, 11:46 PM View Post #22 (Link)
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Oh, never mind about awkward. The long-tme member have had a lot of those

Trust me, we're glad to have you here. My stomach is glad too...
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Old 12-31-2007, 11:47 PM View Post #23 (Link)
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Stomach, Rif-Raf?
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Old 12-31-2007, 11:48 PM View Post #24 (Link)
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And my three brains!
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Old 12-31-2007, 11:48 PM View Post #25 (Link)
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oh my god I just heard fireworks go off I'm so!!!! not excited... ahah... ok I'm done with that

and its not your stomach rafael ((I would call you rif-raf but that seems sort of sketchy this early in my membership)) its your intestines
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Old 12-31-2007, 11:49 PM View Post #26 (Link)
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Indeed, Rif-Raf. How many eyes do you have, again? Six, seeing as there are three of you?
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Old 12-31-2007, 11:50 PM View Post #27 (Link)
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Yes...the other two have 20-20 vision, which is why I'm wearing glasses in my sig

And I think a fourth + fifth one is coming...

BTW, Alex...my intestines aren't the ones that growl every time I'm hungry
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Old 12-31-2007, 11:52 PM View Post #28 (Link)
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Using plus signs, Rif-Raf? I would have thought someone of your intelligence would be beyond that.
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Old 12-31-2007, 11:54 PM View Post #29 (Link)
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Yes, but it's also intelligent to save the 2.476 calories used to type the word plus for future use, and use an existing symbol to accomplish my task. Body effciency is always a must. hy else would I have a separate brain for good and evil?
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Old 12-31-2007, 11:56 PM View Post #30 (Link)
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Well, because you, being the virtuous and yet malevolent person you are, would not be able to cope with one brain, for the good and evil within your single brain would eventually cancel each other out, leaving you with no brain and a shell.
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