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But yeah, that might work better.
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Seems like we might consider that, starry, since Zombie is a lazy freaking bum. Get off your butt and mod already jerk!
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Thankyou for posting this! I am very grateful that you posted this, since I tend to avoid critiquing unless I absolutely have to because I hate hurting people's feelings. So again, I say thankyou!
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Andy, you were born to make guides. Another thing you might want to add is, you need a good imagination to crit or all of you crits will say things like " I dont get this" or "How did he do ( insert impossible thing here.)"
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I feel better about giving critique now. Still rather nervous, but I feel like these guidelines explained it rather well. Here's keeping my fingers crossed that I 'll avoid the sugar-coating.
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If you need any further help or have any more questions on critiquing, you can contact anyone with a green or purple username, and we'll be happy to help.
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Very helpful. Thanks a lot.
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An excellent conclusion for this can be that a critique should be very objective. For this reason it's extremelly hard for me to write critiques for my friends' works.
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