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View Poll Results: Is this poem able to maintain the intimacy as well as the respect for the lady?
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Old 11-21-2017, 05:56 AM View Post #1 (Link) As I feed you fire
aa_y_ush (Offline)
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Join Date: Nov 2017
Location: Moradabad, India
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Eyes were covered were they yours

Dripping magic like a fall in mine

Should I dive in them

Slowly untangling any cover they had

Slowly undoing any cover you have

Should I go through you, your mind and soul

And should you shiver as I kiss those scars

Should I flaunt my fingers on the velvet; your lips

Should you tangle yours across my hand

Should I follow your trails till I touch your waist

And get lost in the depths of your skin

Should I whisper some ice in your ears and then

Send a chill through your legs and spine

Should you walk your breath through my tongue and flame

And take them on a journey unknown

Should you close them- eyes

But uncuffus the covers

As I feed you fire, and I feed me you!
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