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Join Date: May 2017
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Ilana: She’s been missing since Friday and you're not worried?
Sandra's mom: No, she always comes back. Ilana: How do you know? Sandra's mom: Sandra is smart enough. Ilana: Wouldn’t she call you? Sandra's mom: She could have lost her phone. Ilana: You should get in contact with her to make sure she’s okay. Sandra's mom: She went over to a sleepover at Austin’s last Friday. Ilana: It’s been two days. Sandra's mon: I know. Ilana: You should call the police. Sandra's mom: Alright! I know you're concerned. Ilana: If you don’t get in contact i’ll get in contact for you. Sandra's mom: Is she still at Austin’s house? Ilana: If I knew she was there I wouldn’t have came. Sandra's mom: Okay. It’s getting late. My show is about to be on. Ilana: You care about your show more than your daughter, interesting. Sandra's mom: Sandra is careful. You should know. Ilana: Yes, she is smart but sometimes unpredictable things can happen. Sandra's mom:They can but they're rare. Go home. You should get to bed. Ilana: How will if you feel if all doesn’t turn out well? Sandra's mom: You should contact her. Ilana: Alright, I will. Sandra's mom: Why did you bother me? I knew you were going to end up contacting her yourself. Ilana: I wanted to let you know since I thought you cared about her as much or even more than I do. Sandra's mom: You’re leaving me from my TV show. Ilana: Okay. I know. This is more important. What will your husband think? Your friends? Sandra's mom: What if I don’t have a husband or friends? Ilana: Everyone has friends even though they may not have a husband. Sandra's mom: You are very determined. Go contact them like you said you would. Ilana; As long as I can tell you what happened afterward. If I can’t get in contact you have to get in contact. Sandra's mom: I’m not promising anything. I know your getting get into contact. Goodbye. Ilana: Goodbye. If I don’t you're going to see me again demanding you get in contact with someone. Go watch your TV. Goodbye. |
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Join Date: Dec 2017
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