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Old 01-20-2016, 05:18 PM View Post #1 (Link) Might Possibly Be out of my depths
Mermaid Seoul (Offline)
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Hello all!

My name is Ariel and like everyone else here I like to write stories. However I have no confidence in what I write and know that it could be better. So here I am looking for critique partners to help me with my work. I also would love to read what others have written and will do my best to assist you with whatever you have written.

So please dont be strangers!

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Old 01-20-2016, 07:55 PM View Post #2 (Link)
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Hello and welcome! What type of stories do you like to write? What are some of your favourite books?
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Old 01-20-2016, 09:13 PM View Post #3 (Link)
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"Out of my depth"


Welcome to YWO!
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Old 01-21-2016, 04:53 AM View Post #4 (Link)
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what do you write? and do you post your books on other web sites or apps, like wattpad?
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Old 01-21-2016, 04:56 AM View Post #5 (Link)
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Hello, welcome to YWO!

Originally Posted by sbenzing
Wow. So youre a Korean girl who grew up in Hong Kong, lives in the United States now and is studying Spanish in college? You know that's crazy right?
Jisun: I feel like I'm writing some Twilight shit.
Kanen: Ji, I feel like that all the time.
Kanen: The difference is,
Kanen: this is only your first draft.
Kanen: for her, it was her last.
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