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Old 10-28-2007, 10:32 PM View Post #1 (Link) Hello
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Hello, I'm new, and I was referred to here by a person after they read some of my writing and actually heard me out that I thought I needed critiquing. Thank you that person, anyways. I'm Ally, everyone just calls me Ally. I love writing, and I'm pretty good at building characters info., but I perfer to do it as I go on. I'm good at description, but I don't think I describe certain things good enough, like I become lazy in describing certain subjects.

So, these are my flaws and what makes me better at it. Oh, and if I got too carried away in writing, "Hello, salutations, aloha, ko-ne-chy-wa, and hi."

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Old 10-28-2007, 10:35 PM View Post #2 (Link)
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Welcome! JOIN THE GAME NOW!!! (It's in my sig.) JOIN JOIN JOIN NOW NOW NOW

OW My hand hurts. I'm typing with my thumb, so sorry if I make this welcome short. You can check out my stories, and I can crit your stories, and we'll help each other with description, because that's my weakness also.
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Old 10-28-2007, 10:37 PM View Post #3 (Link)
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And that guy would be me! Hey, welcome to the site. Post your work, it was good, but I'd prefer to crit it on here. Enjoy!
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Old 10-28-2007, 10:40 PM View Post #4 (Link)
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A referral from Jordan! I feel so loserly. Then again, you probably just want the virtual books. xDD
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Old 10-28-2007, 10:44 PM View Post #5 (Link)
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Cool; okay...

Carraka: Awesome! If you have outside resources to books, you can give them to me, and I'll be happy to critique yours. I love critiquing, I find it enjoyable, crazy enough.

Shadow: Cool; nice to finally meet you here.

Question. Where do I go to post my stuff to be critiqued?

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Old 10-28-2007, 10:46 PM View Post #6 (Link)
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At the top, beneath the heading, next to Community, is Literature. Click on that. It should be pretty straight-forward.

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=125

Join the game! Heh. Heh. -fades away-
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Old 10-28-2007, 10:50 PM View Post #7 (Link)
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K; thankies!

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BTW; you can add me to your friends list - if we have on on here - if you like.
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Old 10-28-2007, 10:55 PM View Post #8 (Link)
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Yeah. If you click on my name, it should have an Add Carraka to Your Buddy List option. I added you. But as far as I can tell, adding doesn't actually do anything; it just fosters a sense of community.
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Old 10-28-2007, 10:56 PM View Post #9 (Link)
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Come to think of it, I haven't added anybody...
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Old 10-28-2007, 10:58 PM View Post #10 (Link)
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I added you. -sweet smile-
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