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Old 12-11-2015, 02:59 AM View Post #1 (Link) Yello!
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Hi all,

A naive, manic-depressive lyric-enthusiast here. Extremely sorry that I posted something before introducing me first. That was my 'manic' side in play. Please excuse such infraction of norms.

Well, I'm not very good at critiquing, so I'm skeptic as to how useful I will be re: that, but I'll try my best. I'm not good at writing as well I guess, so feel free to leave some comments to help me improve and evolve. Apart from the posts on this site, you can also check some of my other works on my blog (please google 'nositeforoldmen'; I can't give out the link here due to spamming regulations). I would really appreciate it. There are some posts in my mother tongue, namely Bangla, as well, so in the off chance that you encounter them first and get scared away, don't worry and please scroll down to discover something written in (bad) English. The blog also features some of my drawings (look for the tab 'Sketchy sketches'). Though they are as amateurish as the lyrics I write, would love to see some responses to them as well.

Thanks in advance, guys!!
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Old 12-11-2015, 01:42 PM View Post #2 (Link)
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Welcome! Well, this site will help you critique as well as become a great writer.
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Old 12-12-2015, 03:26 PM View Post #3 (Link) Welcome!!!!
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Originally Posted by Untitled View Post
Hi all,

A naive, manic-depressive lyric-enthusiast here. Extremely sorry that I posted something before introducing me first. That was my 'manic' side in play. Please excuse such infraction of norms.

Well, I'm not very good at critiquing, so I'm skeptic as to how useful I will be re: that, but I'll try my best. I'm not good at writing as well I guess, so feel free to leave some comments to help me improve and evolve. Apart from the posts on this site, you can also check some of my other works on my blog (please google 'nositeforoldmen'; I can't give out the link here due to spamming regulations). I would really appreciate it. There are some posts in my mother tongue, namely Bangla, as well, so in the off chance that you encounter them first and get scared away, don't worry and please scroll down to discover something written in (bad) English. The blog also features some of my drawings (look for the tab 'Sketchy sketches'). Though they are as amateurish as the lyrics I write, would love to see some responses to them as well.

Thanks in advance, guys!!
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Old 12-13-2015, 02:47 PM View Post #4 (Link)
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Thanks to you both, Hannah and Scott! Really appreciate it!
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