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Old 01-06-2016, 05:49 PM View Post #21 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Syn View Post
It could be over in 5 minutes xD
Surely there could be a wonderful Romeo and Juliet love story, between some dashing ninja-disguised-as-pirate and lady-pirate. That would add enough time for the rest of the movie, wouldn't it?
Definitely let me know if you'd like a critique--- I'd love to.
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Old 01-06-2016, 08:00 PM View Post #22 (Link)
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I'm thinking of a pirate going on the run in the high seas because the government is really cracking down on pirating and then said pirate learns of opium and is like "Awesome. I'm going to Asia for THAT!" And that's how the pirates end up in Asia and then like ninjas and shit are working for the clan trading the opium or something so like. . . yeah.

I want the main pirate to be female. Not enough female pirates are illuminated.

It'd be mostly realistic but then the sequel would be Ninjas vs. Pirates vs. Robots. And then Ninjas vs. Pirates vs. Robots vs. Zombies. I'm serious. I want to make this movie franchise.
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Old 02-11-2016, 04:02 PM View Post #23 (Link)
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Ninjas can blow up stuff too.
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Old 10-16-2016, 11:45 PM View Post #24 (Link)
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I've recently read a book where ninjas crushed some pirates, so...
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