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Old 09-10-2014, 04:49 AM View Post #1 (Link) Finish That Story Game!
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"I awoke in a dark room."
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Old 09-10-2014, 07:15 AM View Post #2 (Link)
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(Not a contribution to the game, but just a note that I edited the title because I refuse to let a thread on this forum contain the word "dat" and contain more than one exclamation mark)
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Old 09-10-2014, 02:44 PM View Post #3 (Link)
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I was massively hungover from the party last night, so my senses were spinning.
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Old 09-10-2014, 07:07 PM View Post #4 (Link)
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Once the room stilled and I found my bearings, I realized I was standing in something wet and squishy.
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A crowd of drunk and smelly bodies held me propped against the wall.
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Old 09-11-2014, 04:22 PM View Post #6 (Link)
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(ha this got suggestive quickly)

I couldn't remember anyone, so I asked what was going on.
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Old 12-25-2014, 12:47 AM View Post #7 (Link)
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And believe I received no clue from their jabbering
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Old 12-25-2014, 08:46 AM View Post #8 (Link)
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I turned on the light, shoved my hand in my pocket and took out a pile of bucks stained in something red and sticky.
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At first I thought it was blood, but no one looked injured. . .
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Old 11-16-2015, 12:45 AM View Post #10 (Link)
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Upon closer inspection, what I thought was blood was actually juice from red raspberries . . .
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