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Old 09-19-2014, 06:59 PM View Post #11 (Link) This post is a reply - don't critique it
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Old 11-09-2014, 02:17 AM View Post #12 (Link) Hey
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U should draw the outer line a bit thinner. The color was nice but outer line looks a bit dirty. Color should be more than the drawing line. Don't use big brush to draw the line. Use a small brush and draw some leaves if u can add it.
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Old 08-27-2015, 09:39 PM View Post #13 (Link) Amazing!
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Lovely picture!!
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Old 03-09-2016, 09:47 PM View Post #14 (Link) Interesting
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Originally Posted by Kaerain View Post
While I think that the painting is good, I am not sure what type of art you are trying to create. It seems as though it leading into the abstract side of art, but it's not too clear.
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Old 03-20-2016, 06:00 PM View Post #15 (Link)
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I enjoyed the simplicity of your flowers
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