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Old 02-02-2014, 06:04 PM View Post #11 (Link)
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So be it, but she is actually a giant dragon. And you know how that will end for you mortal humans.

I wish I could go anywhere I wanted instantly.
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Old 02-02-2014, 06:11 PM View Post #12 (Link)
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Sure, but you can never stay in the same place more than 5 seconds.

I wish the world were a different place..
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Old 02-02-2014, 07:00 PM View Post #13 (Link)
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So be it, albeit a different place where you're so vigorously striving to might be only a figment of your imagination.


I wish a were a president. (Don't laugh, please)
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Old 02-02-2014, 07:22 PM View Post #14 (Link)
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So be it, but you're the president of the US, and you've made a muck of things.

I wish that I were rich.
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Old 02-02-2014, 08:39 PM View Post #15 (Link)
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So be it, your legal name is Richard now.

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Pro-tip: because my first instinct is to procrastinate anything I see as an obligation or responsibility, asking me for a critique is a good way to make sure I never give you a critique.
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Old 02-03-2014, 05:07 AM View Post #16 (Link)
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Well, so be it, but your dog speaks only Russian, and I wonder how are you going to read it?

I wish I were Justin Bieber.
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Old 02-03-2014, 05:13 AM View Post #17 (Link)
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I can't even list how many reasons why this is a bad idea.

I wish I could always be hydrated, even if I don't drink a drop of water for a year.
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Old 02-03-2014, 09:52 PM View Post #18 (Link)
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So be it, but as a result, you can only eat a tiny bag of pretzels each day and only one per day.

I wish that I didn't have this headache.
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"One day, I'd like to be the last remaining magical thing in this un-magical world. Right now, I could be anything; a powder keg or a box of cornflakes. But one day, I'll be magic, and magic will suit me as I explode in every direction like a fire cracker in a box of crayons."
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I will give you a magical hat that removes your headache.

The headache returns when you remove it.

I wish classes weren't canceled again.
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Old 02-04-2014, 05:47 AM View Post #20 (Link)
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But some crazy guy is dreaming in other way and is going to attend the classes with a crossbow.

I wish a dough were growing up in my pocket.
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