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Old 12-30-2013, 02:29 PM View Post #21 (Link)
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Counting out the alphabet on his blood-soaked fingers, Steven couldn't remember if H came next, or if it was J, and he suddenly wished he had paid more attention in elementary school.

Next: A building is almost finished being built, but the architect has included something secret and dastardly in its design
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Old 12-30-2013, 05:58 PM View Post #22 (Link)
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The architect continued to gaze, as Honourable Smart wobbled away with his pot belly after the daily site inspection. Then, he sloped his head to the almost finished building which belonged to this unfortunate politician.
"Poor fellow," he thought, as he lit a cigar. "If only he knew that cameras have been implanted into the walls of every room."
He chuckeld at the thought.


Next - The thoughts of a starving man, who sees as a kid accidentally drops a hundred dollar bill.
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Old 01-01-2014, 10:29 AM View Post #23 (Link)
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The hundred dollar bill gently fell onto the brick pavement as the man reached out and grabbed for it; he knew he shouldn't do it, but the monster clawing at the insides of his starving stomach compelled him to take what he could get his hands on.

Next: A buccaneer commandeering a ship into harsh weather.
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Old 01-01-2014, 03:32 PM View Post #24 (Link)
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Hmm, let me know what you guys think of my sentence--I might be able to use it as a the start to a short story.

The waves were rough and the clouds were grey, shadows loomed over the ship as the fearless buccaneer steered his massive tank of a ship into the Bermuda Triangle.

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Old 01-02-2014, 11:33 AM View Post #25 (Link)
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"How is he?" Jane asked me as she looked at where Dave lay unconscious on a hospital bed, and I knew, by her tone, her manner, that my sister, my workaholic, reliable sister, was the other woman my husband was screwing.

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Old 01-02-2014, 05:28 PM View Post #26 (Link)
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(I'd like to say that the theme could be a ton more interesting, but...)

"Stay close," Rob said as he pulled me through the crowd. "Get lost here and you stay lost. This cloak and dagger play is a lot more real than you think."

Next: Seeing your face in the mirror for the first time after a burn/accident. That should be interesting.
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Old 01-02-2014, 09:45 PM View Post #27 (Link)
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They told me I wouldn't recognize myself after the accident, to prepare for the worst, but all I could think of when I stared at the charred scabs was how much... better I looked.

Next: Two businessmen are meeting for a lunch, but something is quite unusual.
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Old 01-08-2014, 11:52 AM View Post #28 (Link)
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James shook hands with the other man and said, "Let's get down to business," before noticing a hint of a gun sticking out of a bag partly hidden behind the wooden legs of the other man's seat.

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Old 01-08-2014, 07:07 PM View Post #29 (Link)
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Denied, the word mocked him and his book like all its relatives; Rejected, No thank you, We are sorry to say... No.

Next: The book opens in the middle of a fight.
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No one had time to see which spell the book had cast, but the Tome of Death seldom spoke of kindly of living.

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