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Old 05-21-2013, 08:53 AM View Post #11 (Link)
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The King in the North!

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Old 05-21-2013, 10:11 AM View Post #12 (Link)
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Old 05-21-2013, 02:05 PM View Post #13 (Link)
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Congratulations Dabs!
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Old 05-21-2013, 04:40 PM View Post #14 (Link)
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I've already told you, Dabs, that you're rising from Dabs to a dab, and it turned out I was close to truth. So congratulations! And congratulations to Bookworm, lostbookworm and Squint, our future champions!
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Old 05-21-2013, 10:03 PM View Post #15 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Derezzination View Post


The King in the North!

Congratulations.
This is my favorite thingy ever.

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I've already told you, Dabs, that you're rising from Dabs to a dab, and it turned out I was close to truth. So congratulations! And congratulations to Bookworm, lostbookworm and Squint, our future champions!
I do not understand the nature of my transformation from Dabs to a dab. What is happening to me? Help.
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Old 05-21-2013, 11:13 PM View Post #16 (Link)
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Old 05-21-2013, 11:37 PM View Post #17 (Link)
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Congrats Dabs, you really deserve it. Same to the others bookworm, lostbookworm and Squint I'm sure you have it the next time
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Old 05-22-2013, 04:05 AM View Post #18 (Link)
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I do not understand the nature of my transformation from Dabs to a dab. What is happening to me? Help.[/QUOTE]

I can't help thinking that The God only knows what happening with you, but, in my opinion, you seem to be on the straight way of becoming a master. ( dab - means master )
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Originally Posted by Georgy View Post
I do not understand the nature of my transformation from Dabs to a dab. What is happening to me? Help.
I can't help thinking that The God only knows what happening with you, but, in my opinion, you seem to be on the straight way of becoming a master. ( dab - means master ) [/QUOTE]

Oh! Oh lordy, that's too much flattery!
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Old 05-22-2013, 06:59 AM View Post #20 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Dabs View Post
I can't help thinking that The God only knows what happening with you, but, in my opinion, you seem to be on the straight way of becoming a master. ( dab - means master )
Oh! Oh lordy, that's too much flattery![/QUOTE]

Well, work on making this true, then
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