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Old 10-13-2007, 10:29 PM View Post #11 (Link)
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No no, Shadow, I was basing this off of the last member who was around the same age that took the crits everyone gave very poorly and thought you all hated her and were being mean. I didn't want this member to feel that way...
I don't know how you write Nyx, I just based my assumptions off of common writing tropes in your age range. You might be far advanced from anyone else your age, or you might not, or you could simply need a little more time to really develop your craft. So, I wasn't trying to be mean or rude to you or anyone else Nyx. Not in any way. I want your time here to be productive!
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Old 10-14-2007, 12:24 AM View Post #12 (Link)
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Ayaya, Car! Stop torturing the Administrator (that should come on some national holiday)...

I like the name by the way...Nyx: goddess of night...sister of Aether, daughter of Erebus, mother of...ya i'll stop now...

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Old 10-14-2007, 12:25 AM View Post #13 (Link)
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There's a Torture the Administrator Day?

If there isn't we should declare one. (:
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Old 10-14-2007, 12:27 AM View Post #14 (Link)
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Monsieur Andy! Senor Shaun! What do you think?
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Old 10-14-2007, 12:28 AM View Post #15 (Link)
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Well Andy is on a retreat, so I can't speak for him, but I really don't care. Torture me
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Old 10-14-2007, 12:32 AM View Post #16 (Link)
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Awww! You agreed! That's spoils everything! ...I guess Carraka's the only one who can torture you now!

Excuse us, Nyx...
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Old 10-14-2007, 07:33 PM View Post #17 (Link)
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WOW, I didn't see this, HOWDY HOWDY HOWDY!!! I didn't join a site til I was like 14, just cause I never really got online til then. But I started writing at 12. I can't wait to see some of your work!!!! Welcome again, if you have any questions fill free to pm me. I'm TN by the way, or Cowgirl, which ever you wish to call me .


PS. Raf, this aint' TW, its YWO , no one else seemed to see that, oh well
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Old 10-14-2007, 08:01 PM View Post #18 (Link)
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Yeah, you're not supposed to agree to torture. o.O

Then again, you might not know what you're agreeing to. (-insert evil laughter-) I say, there are loads of awful things we can do, aren't there?
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Old 10-14-2007, 08:14 PM View Post #19 (Link)
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Welcome to YWO, Nix! And thanks for your comment on my prologue! I'll return the favor soon enough.
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Old 10-15-2007, 02:33 AM View Post #20 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Shaun View Post
.You might be far advanced from anyone else your age, or you might not, or you could simply need a little more time to really develop your craft. So, I wasn't trying to be mean or rude to you or anyone else Nyx. Not in any way. I want your time here to be productive!
No worries, I'm not offended. I am used to criticism though since I joined my first writing website two years ago but then it closed down and I haven't joined anything like that until now. But I'm looking forward to spending time in YWO!
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