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Old 01-22-2014, 10:15 PM View Post #521 (Link)
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I'd wonder why two giant quavers were hovering above me and then assume that I'd gone crazy, just like we all suspected I would.
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I'd be in confusion as to how on earth a plant overtook my window.
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Old 01-22-2014, 10:24 PM View Post #523 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Rachael View Post
I'd be in confusion as to how on earth a plant overtook my window.
Never question the ability of the cat-mint, Rachael. Never.
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Old 01-22-2014, 11:23 PM View Post #524 (Link)
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Never question the ability of the cat-mint, Rachael. Never.
Sorry. Cat-mint? Nice name whatever it means.
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Old 01-22-2014, 11:33 PM View Post #525 (Link)
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I'd be wondering

1. Where the music's coming from, and

2. Why I'm in a cartoon. Because musical notes only float in the air in cartoons.
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Old 01-22-2014, 11:48 PM View Post #526 (Link)
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I'd be scared and then next thing ya know I'd be petting him. He's scary-cute.
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Old 01-23-2014, 04:39 AM View Post #527 (Link)
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I would wonder if I was high and was seeing music notes
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Old 01-23-2014, 09:42 PM View Post #528 (Link)
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I think I'd wake up and swear I was dreaming about a pretty girl who had wavy hair and blue eyes, and then as my eyes adjusted to the light I'd see her and cry out: "Oh, your here finally to help me sing!"
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Old 01-24-2014, 01:39 PM View Post #529 (Link)
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I'd be like, "Wow! A music note." Then I'd pinch myself.
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Old 01-24-2014, 03:14 PM View Post #530 (Link)
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I'd be pretty excited if there was a horse in my room. I might be a little creeped out by the person riding the horse though....
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