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Old 04-03-2018, 02:06 PM View Post #1 (Link) Hi, I'm new, I'm just starting to write
JohnFick (Offline)
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I write different poems, sometimes simple rhymes. Sometimes I do not use rhymes, but I try to express what I feel and see in my words.
I am rather happy with life, but I know what sadness is. I spend a lot of time online.

I do not see where I can publish my poems, is there a section?
Here's a small sample:

I love the evening silence of my balcony,
Moths like orbs dancing by the lamp
Stars, cold and crickets symphony
the glow exalted the moon on my cheek like a stamp

Can you buy or sell?
Holy peace when your day
stops hitting like a bell.
When the cold rushes into the room
Are feelings a currency?
I have my own resume
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Old 04-20-2018, 08:17 AM View Post #2 (Link)
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Newbie here too! And this is a good piece of yours. To me, given how modern culture has changed, there is no specific need to use rhymes in poems, nor strict structure as well. I wonder, who exactly was your source of inspiration for this one?
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