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Old 05-09-2018, 05:26 PM View Post #11 (Link) Reply
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This is amazing! I would love to hear more.
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Old 05-23-2018, 12:46 AM View Post #12 (Link)
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Good war story
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Old 06-17-2018, 01:56 AM View Post #13 (Link)
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Good story
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Old 06-17-2018, 04:52 AM View Post #14 (Link) My first night in the Army ...
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"My first night in the Army was spent shivering as cold enveloped us..."

This story should say, the first night in the (field or combat,) not Army. The first night in the Army is spent in boot camp, usually with a bed, not ice, somewhere at the end of the night.




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Old 06-19-2018, 08:18 AM View Post #15 (Link)
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great story.
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