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Old 12-10-2007, 07:21 PM View Post #211 (Link)
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"Idiot," Dante sighed. "You target it from the inside. Must I repeat myself every time? You enter its acid ducts, which fire once every thirty seconds, and take out it's innards, the brain, heart, liver, and spinal cord in that order."

The wound on the Fourth began to regenerate. The Zeppelin-sized zombie began to thrash again, snapping the stairs.

"Hurry," Dante said.
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Old 12-10-2007, 07:23 PM View Post #212 (Link)
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Andreas smiles...jumping into the duct after a shot had been fired..he then started to cut the beast up inside, in the order the other told him to do...
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Old 12-12-2007, 04:14 AM View Post #213 (Link)
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Dante called up another bunch of stairs for the man to use. He nodded in approval.

You took down the fourth in seconds," he said. Nice job. Two more to go...and mind you, the fifth is a sneaky one. Best be on our guard..."
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Old 12-12-2007, 06:27 AM View Post #214 (Link)
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As the creature exloded, Andreas casually stepped down the new stairs..."I am sure he will be a challange..."
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Old 12-19-2007, 07:44 PM View Post #215 (Link)
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"The Second is what you'd call a Pathogen Cloud. It is a living fog made up of millions of trillions of flesh-eating protists help together under one collective intelligence. It is impossible to kill The Second with physical attacks. Only by targetting the core intelligence, we'll be able to disperse the cloud and move onto the First...who is impossible to kill in any way except by targetting the real Sarah herself."

Dante sighed.

"Gets kinds complicated, eh?"
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Old 04-24-2011, 08:20 AM View Post #216 (Link)
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This.. is weird. Lets try it.

Name: Milrose West
Age: 20
Origins: Texas
Present Location: A ditched circus in Nevada, alone but still sane
Profession/Skills: Axe throwing, fast magnum reloading, good accuracy with weapons. Wild, machine gun southwestern talkativeness.
Known Mutations: None
Current powers: Immunity
Family: Unknown. She was out camping in the canyon when the incident happened. She doesnt care about her family because she hated them. Her friends in the circus are all eaten alive by zombies, only her and her bestfriend, who's the reason he's still on it it survive.
Appearance: medium height, dresses like a cowgirl with a magnum and a S&W on her belt. An axe and a bullrope was strapped on her back along with ammunitions. She is blonde.

She's quite dumb
 
Old 04-24-2011, 05:30 PM View Post #217 (Link)
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This thread has been dead since 2007, hon. Check the dates on threads before you unearth them, please.
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And there in a wood a Piggy-wig stood,
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Originally Posted by Alice Glitterhorn View Post
This thread has been dead since 2007, hon. Check the dates on threads before you unearth them, please.
Closed.
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