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Old 12-11-2013, 02:05 AM View Post #1 (Link) Co - Write Lyrics Together!
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This thread is for songwriters who want to write songs with others, and get better at lyric writing.
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Old 12-11-2013, 02:38 AM View Post #2 (Link)
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Oh! Me, me , me! haha. I'm up for trying to go for a brand new song, or finishing one that one of us has started. Its up to you!
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Hurrah!! Lets see, I don't know.
Haha, here's one lyric that I made up just now. You can add to it or do whatever you like with it.


Your smiles bury your heart,
and your guilt beats in the dark.
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Old 12-11-2013, 02:53 AM View Post #4 (Link)
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Your smiles bury your heart,
and your guilt beats in the dark.
Like the walls that come crashing down
I know that you'll always be around.
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Old 12-11-2013, 03:07 AM View Post #5 (Link)
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Your smiles bury your heart,
and your guilt beats in the dark.
Like the walls that come crashing down
I know that you'll always be around.

Loyality has been stained black,
and now your picking up your sack
running to your own fate,
while you scratch me off your slate.
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Old 12-11-2013, 03:09 AM View Post #6 (Link)
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So to me these lyrics are building around someone who views a second person as consistent, loyal, constant while that second person is not giving such consideration to the first. Is this what you see?
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Old 12-11-2013, 06:02 PM View Post #7 (Link)
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Kinda, more like me wishing for this person to be consistent, and loyal, but he won't and keeps lying kind of thing, and ignoring me to death.
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Old 12-11-2013, 07:26 PM View Post #8 (Link)
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Hmmm perhaps real life experience?
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Old 12-11-2013, 08:45 PM View Post #9 (Link)
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Um.. kinda. Its happened before. w/ one of those three boys I told ya about.
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Old 12-11-2013, 09:05 PM View Post #10 (Link)
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Oh ok. And were these two verses that we have the chorus or just two plain verses in a song that has no chorus left
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