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Old 11-18-2013, 01:43 PM View Post #11 (Link)
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I'll add The Girl and the Grave by addictedtoreading
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Old 11-18-2013, 06:33 PM View Post #12 (Link)
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That was posted in September, so I can't put it up here.
 
Old 11-20-2013, 12:57 AM View Post #13 (Link)
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The Wind Caller's Wife - Infinity Man
Despite my critique, I think this story is original, and I love the writing style.
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Old 11-20-2013, 01:34 AM View Post #14 (Link)
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Guys, pay attention to the post dates! This is for OCTOBER SUBMISSIONS, not november or september! I already put up the spotlight, too.
 
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Originally Posted by Dabs View Post
Guys, pay attention to the post dates! This is for OCTOBER SUBMISSIONS, not november or september! I already put up the spotlight, too.
I know that was directed at me, so I'm sorry.
I didn't really notice that it was for October, I must have been sleep posting so I just happened to remember what I wanted to suggest and I did the wrong one.

Anyhow, Here's one suggestion for October.
Vile (newest draft)
The author originally posted this on 10 - 15 - 13.
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Old 11-21-2013, 04:27 AM View Post #16 (Link)
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It's not just directed at you. It's also directed at Pony123, who suggested something from September.

Also, I appreciate you nominating my work, but like I said, I've already posted the spotlight. I don't add anything after it goes up. This is why I push for you guys to nominate before I post it. lol
 
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Originally Posted by Rachael View Post
The Wind Caller's Wife - Infinity Man
I think this story is original, and I love the writing style.
I couldn't help but support this nomination because the wind-woman-lover line is amazing and I never met this before and, Rachael, I don't understand why are you bothering so much about your critique, forget about it already.
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[QUOTE=Rachael;176494]I know that was directed at me, so I'm sorry.
I didn't really notice that it was for October, I must have been sleep posting so I just happened to remember what I wanted to suggest and I did the wrong one.


What can I say? You're a funny guy. For a long time nobody could make me laugh so heartily.
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Originally Posted by Dabs View Post
It's not just directed at you. It's also directed at Pony123, who suggested something from September.

Also, I appreciate you nominating my work, but like I said, I've already posted the spotlight. I don't add anything after it goes up. This is why I push for you guys to nominate before I post it. lol

Ah silly me.
And sorry for being so dumb, but where and what spotlight did you post? I haven't seen anything lately. Sorry!!!!
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Old 11-21-2013, 09:59 PM View Post #20 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Georgy View Post
I couldn't help but support this nomination because the wind-woman-lover line is amazing and I never met this before and, Rachael, I don't understand why are you bothering so much about your critique, forget about it already.
Oh, I don't care about it really. I did my job and did the best I could do. I kinda feel like I wasn't of any help to Infinity Man though after Rose crited my Critique. But I'm fine. Never worry about Rachael.
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