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Old 06-25-2018, 12:11 PM View Post #1 (Link) Star Wars, Transformers, Halo, + Other Fanfic
Gyasi Myles (Offline)
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Strange World

(No dialogue)
FADE IN:

INT. OUTER SPACE

Meteoroids, quasars, meteor showers, plus supernovas as the backdrop.
Glimpse of sunless new planet named Gaia 397 with crisscrossed rings. It closely orbits around a massive ice sphere. It's lit by the bright multicolored nebulae clouds in its skies, has an area of visible sound waves that quickly vibrate up in its sky, pure energy vibrates, pulsates, fluxes, twists, turns, and changes colors within its skies, scattered tiny stars hover within its skies, soil chunks drift within its skies, lava oceans are on its surface, it has a water lake which is its only waterbody.

DISSOLVE TO.

EXT. GAIA 397 CRISSCROSSED RINGS

On dusty icy boulders which make up the rings gallop creatures made of dust and electricity. They're partly shaped like large rabbits, have rabbity shaped heads and torsos of dust, horse shaped forelegs and hind legs of dust, lion shaped tails of dust, electric eyes, electric teeth, electric fangs, and electric tongues. In packs they race each other, pant smiling, jump onto different ice dust boulders, dodge opening black holes which dust ice boulders get sucked into before the black holes shut.

CUT TO.

INT. GAIA 397 LOCALE CALLED SOUNDSCAPE

We hear Soundscape's melodic music instrument notes and chorus notes, which are both produced by its sound waves that quickly vibrate up in the sky. The music switches to this rap type beat, changes again to soothing slow ambient music. Soundscape has earless mouthless purple flying anthropoids within it.

They hover while they meditate to the vibrations with eyes shut legs crisscrossed. Bony malnourished ones return from someplace else, fly back inside of Soundscape, regain weight and muscle as the vibrations feed them. Soundscape's music changes genres and is heard on and off everywhere on Gaia 397.

FADE TO.

INT. GAIA 397 REGION KNOWN AS TERRASPHERE

While on those soil chunks which drift through multicolored nebula clouds, these flower pedal-haired humanoid plant ETs with green stemlike skin all pick tiny hovering stars, swallow them, fart out drifting nebula gases that become part of nebula clouds.

Tiny stars explode into nebula clouds, nebula clouds form tiny stars. The humanoid plant ETs race each other when they use metallic high speed drill vehicles to dig through then vehicle leap onto different soil chunks. They coexist with swarms of giant wingless bipedal flies who bounce around on two legs as they slobber out silk.

Terrasphere's soil is alive and speaks its own language that's foreign. Many giant wingless flies dig eating deep into and throughout the insides of the talking, giggling, screaming, wailing living soil chunks, eat their way back to the surfaces, digested soil becomes mud which they sweat from out of their pores.

Some bounce up to the plant ETs, lick and brush against them, let the plant ETs pet them. Black holes open far below them, suck up lava, close, white holes open in the sky, sprinkle out that same lava.

The giant wingless flies eat their way to the center of soil chunks, plant beings enter their drill vehicles, they're all sheltered as it rains lava. White holes shut, lava rain stops, giant wingless flies slobber silk all over one another, their slobber forms cocoons which encase their bodies.

CUT TO.

EXT. GAIA 397 AREA NAMED IGNEOUS ARCHIPELAGO

Lava surrounded cluster of igneous islands where volcanoes erupt, pitch-black heatproof anthropoid lesbian race of voluptuous aliens lay and sit together, there's no male counterpart of their species. The alien women use telepathy to speak their alien language to one another near lava lakes, lava rivers, and lavafalls, sip lava from precious metal goblets. Couples hold hands, cuddle, kiss, massage each other. On metal surfboards within a sea more of them lava surf. Some swim laughing after lava waves knock them off their boards.

Others sail on a ship made of precious metals near a shoal of rhino-horned triple-headed pitch-black sea serpents who hiss, horn off metal from their ship then devour it, dive, resurface, turn flips out of lava. One gets harpooned on deck by the pitch-black anthropoids who let it die from breathing in air. They dice its carcass up, feast on it. Captain steers clear of lava whirlpools and lavaspouts. Lava maelstrom forms near ship, sucks ship in, captain and crew guffaw while feasting, lose their balance, bump into each other as lava maelstrom rotates ship around.

FADE TO.

INT. GAIA 397 NATION CALLED AERONAUTIC QUEENDOM

An enormous sphere of nonstop blustering gale-force winds fills a crater, spins above it. Within it are many whirlwinds and male noseless humanesque beings who have webbed underarms like flying squirrels and guffaw when they spin around in whirlwinds. Within this transparent solid plasma castle that hovers, the only female one wears a crystal crown, lounges on her soft cushiony plasma thrown, sips mud from a chalice.

She watches dozens of males flap and glide through the strong winds, play a game where one team catches and throws floating plasma frisbees to each other while they dodge the other team who tackles them, stiff-arms them, tries to snatch the plasma frisbees from their hands before they hurl each into wormholes, which the plasma frisbees exit out the other side of in one second.

They coexist with flocks of gargantuan footless legless creatures who have feathered whale shaped torsos, one big turkey tail instead of flukes, two adjacent horns that spiral upwards on their oriental dragon heads, bat wings instead of flippers. The creatures flap their wings and tails, glide around throughout Aeronautic Queendom, many land then roost down in its crater, males start rutting over females, others swoop down outside of its winds towards lava ocean, prey on leaping triple-headed rhino-horned sea serpents, roar when horned by a few.

Within Aeronautic Queendom male noseless webbed underarm beings who flap and glide through winds all help one another pluck a gigantic feather from one of those dragon bird bat whales. The males glide into that only female's solid plasma castle who's still on her soft cushiony plasma thrown.They kneel, bow to her, massage her, use that plucked gigantic feather to fan her.

DISSOLVE TO.

EXT. GAIA 397 LOCALE KNOWN AS CRYSTALLINELAND

Human woman and man in spacesuits jetpack land on lava surrounded continent made of crystals. They use heatproof cups to pour lava into heatproof bowls filled with tiny crystals.

The tiny crystals sizzle, pop turning into mushy clumps. The astronaut couple spoon-feeds each other the mushy clumps.

CUT TO.

INT. GAIA 397 REGION NAMED HAIRY FOREST

That spaceman and his spacewoman jetpack land on an expanse of what looks like skin surrounded by a mud sea. From out of the mud sea, huge creatures with venus flytrap heads, toad torsos, furry grizzly bear forelegs, hind legs, and paws swim ashore.

They tongue stretch grab then body slam the jetpacking astronauts back down onto the skin expanse, chase them into its forest of gigantic sky-high human looking hairs where car-sized germs who are quadruped pack animals also chase them.

CUT TO.

INT. GAIA 397 AREA CALLED CHASM OF DARKNESS

Within dark chasm, the spacewoman and her spaceman jetpack land on cliff, enter dark cave that's lit by bioluminescent humanesque ETs who glow different colors, dance to Soundscape's music. The astronaut couple dances with the ETs.

DISSOLVE TO.

INT. GAIA 397 NATION KNOWN AS AQUALAYSIA

Beneath that saltwater lake swim webbed footed webbed handed gilled anthropoid fish aliens who play hide-and-seek within kelp forest, pick seaweed, eat it raw. Beside them, from out of underwater giant wingless fly cocoons burst these swimming huge gilled ant-headed creatures with orange furred hyena torsos, armadillo-like wing shells, and long jellyfish limbs who use their mouth pincers to pick seaweed before they chew it.

The insect fish creatures swim to the lake's surface, their wing shells open with quick moving insect wings underneath. They fly to Terrasphere where the females lay eggs which giant wormlike larvae hatch from. The squirmy giant wormlike larvae morph into giant wingless flies, stand on two legs, bounce around slobbering. The insect fish curl themselves up into armadillo shell balls, roll around soil chunks while they let plant ETs balance atop them.

A flock of those bat whale bird dragons swoop in, prey on giant wingless flies. As armadillo shell balls their buzzing insect fish parents roll off of soil chunks, shell ram into the dragon bat whale birds who counterattack with head swinging spiral horn strikes. The hyena insect fish uncurl from shells, fly around, use their long jellyfish limbs to sting the predators until one dies, plummets into lava ocean with sizzling splash.

The other bat dragon whale birds soar away, drop humongous turds from the sky, roar. Some of the insect fish creatures stare at their hatchlings' giant cracked eggs, shed tears with sobbing plant ETs who they let mount on them. Others carry giant cocoons down to Aqualaysia's lake floor.

CUT TO.

EXT. GAIA 397 LOCALE NAMED STORMY CENTRAL

Lava ocean nonstop heats that massive ice sphere, causes vapor and clouds to form then drift from out of the ice sphere and into hollow Gaia 397's inner earth opening.

Inside of Gaia 397 lies nothing but countless mountains that stick out horizontally from Gaia 397's rocky inner walls. From those clouds it blizzards, hails, and thundershowers onto the horizontal mountains.

Within the Stormy Central ride toddler plant ETs on the backs of hovering insect fish. The toddler plant ETs giggle and smile when rain water pours on them, rapidly makes their soaked bodies grow till they're teenage looking then morph to full adults.

While mounted on the back of a hovering newborn bird whale bat dragon, aliens from Igneous Archipelago enter Stormy Central, lift up precious metal jugs, let pouring rainwater fill them.

FADE TO.

INT. GAIA 397 REGION CALLED ELECTROMAGDALE

On this metal staticky magnetic valley between igneous mountains, mechanical beings made out of precious metals with arms, legs, heads, and torsos go clunk while they jog upright, sideways, and upside down along metal staticky magnetic pathways that go up and down with loops and spirals.

They reach an igneous lava seashore, we see they're heatproof once they wade and swim in lava, playfully lava splash one another. A shoal of those rhino-horned triple-headed lava sea serpents slither ashore Electromagdale, gobble up a few metal mechanical beings while the others sprint away screaming.

From out of white hole, dust ice boulder falls into lava ocean. From out of more white holes a pack of those dust creatures drop down onto Electromagdale, brawl with the rhino-horned triple-headed lava sea serpents, shock bite each.

DISSOLVE TO.

EXT. GAIA 397 AREA KNOWN AS DESERTICOUS

When on a continent of sands, that astronaut couple squints at a mirage, sips water from bottles, slides down sand dunes, reaches this dry lava seashore filled with cracks, helps those aliens from Igneous Archipelago finish build this mansion sized sand castle by mixing jug rainwater with loose dune sands.

They all go inside of the sand mansion, feast at its hard sand dining room table while seated in its hardened sand chairs, evacuate up several sand dunes, laugh, cheer, and clap giving a round of applause to one lava tsunami that washes the mansion sized sand castle away.

FADE OUT.
  
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Old 07-02-2018, 09:55 PM View Post #2 (Link) This post is a reply - don't critique it
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No dialogue makes these long-winded and ridiculous haha
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