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Old 02-20-2010, 10:24 PM View Post #1 (Link) Angel Girl
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Okay so this took me two days because the first time I did it, it got ruined (I was so close to finishing aswell TT-TT)
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Old 02-21-2010, 10:47 AM View Post #2 (Link)
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Originally Posted by ICeAngel302 View Post
Okay so this took me two days because the first time I did it, it got ruined (I was so close to finishing aswell TT-TT)
her legs want to be more detailed (if she is naked) .I think that long curly hair would suit her to .Her wings are beautiful and you could draw her face tooo (eyes, mouth)

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Old 02-21-2010, 02:07 PM View Post #3 (Link)
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Originally Posted by ICeAngel302 View Post
Okay so this took me two days because the first time I did it, it got ruined (I was so close to finishing aswell TT-TT)
Hey ICeAngel, I just want to say that your drawing is really simple (no offence to you of course)... The idea isn't bad, the drawing just needs a lot of details... I don't know why, but it seems like the page is blank when I look at it, maybe because I am obsessed with details (I've been told :p) Anyway, keep up the good work, and practice drawing...
Das ist das ende

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Old 02-22-2010, 02:31 PM View Post #4 (Link)
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I really like the whole idea. The precision, the proportion, is almost perfect, but it's lacking in detail and that spark that makes it special. It's just an average girl with wings - there's nothing that hints at something more. She doesn't have a face - though I think that may have been done purposely, and her hair is just...plain, normal, straight. Just a girl with wings. But I do like the way you've drawn the wings as a kind of protector around her, the hunched back and the arms around her - it's well thought out. Consider working on more detail.
Old 02-23-2010, 06:24 PM View Post #5 (Link)
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It liked it alot i think for one, though it should be darker and there should be more detail. I absoluetiy love the faceless thing!!!! That's how I draw most of my artwork whe it's full bodied. To me it adds mystery to it and leaves room for the veiwers to make it their own a little bit by imagining a face by themselves. You need to add some shadows to it so that it looks at least a little bit 3-D. Otherwise mi gusta mucha!!! Hahaha!!
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Old 03-05-2010, 09:42 PM View Post #6 (Link) Cool
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Hey, it's Niiah from the chatroom. I like this a lot! You're super talented and trust me, I couldn't do this for crap. I'm just a writer. But really, super, cool.
Old 03-07-2010, 08:58 PM View Post #7 (Link)
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The wings are amazingly good. Sad angels are easier to draw then happy angels i've discovered *at least for me*
Old 11-09-2014, 02:49 AM View Post #8 (Link) hey
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I liked the wings of the angel but the legs seem imbalance? I don't know how to say about that. but if you want draw an angel without a face then u should draw shadow to show that angel got face. And I prefer you draw an angel is flying high. If you wanted to draw naked then u can half naked. I mean upper naked and below chest is cover with the wings. Not all the angel's wings must spread out and fly!
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