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Old 07-15-2008, 07:11 PM View Post #11 (Link)
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but I thought "sentance" gave it an extra kick

ok, I'l l fix it, but hold on let me continue first

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George...I already posted a word after "while".
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New sentence (they'll hate me for this)
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damnit, you couldn't go on with sexual innuendo could you, you had to stop it right there. *sigh* you'll learn. I'll put these in the first post as we go along ((assuming we don't start moving to fast)).

And screw you carr, making me change my incorrect title even though I didn't do anything to it >.<

Ok then well.... new sentance


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