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Old 01-26-2015, 07:40 PM View Post #1 (Link) Free Style Writing
gabby9801 (Offline)
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Overthinking.....a term most girls now-a-days don't speak they just do.
It's hard when you're going through the motions and feel that no one is beside you.
I thought long and hard about how I wanted my life to turn out,
but as I turn around, look down my feet are still on this thing that we call earth
thank god I can have it.
Have it and hold it every dream, aspiration, and sometimes I feel I got to sale my soul.
Just keep up with the rif raf and do what I love just so people can see that
that I am ME and nobody can take my brains away from me thank you for listening I hope you learn to love me!!!
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Old 08-27-2015, 10:46 PM View Post #2 (Link) good?
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This is uh, really nice.
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Old 03-29-2016, 01:08 PM View Post #3 (Link)
Abhiram Ramachandran (Offline)
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Originally Posted by gabby9801 View Post
Overthinking.....a term most girls now-a-days don't speak they just do.
It's hard when you're going through the motions and feel that no one is beside you.
I thought long and hard about how I wanted my life to turn out,
but as I turn around, look down my feet are still on this thing that we call earth
thank god I can have it.
Have it and hold it every dream, aspiration, and sometimes I feel I got to sale my soul.
Just keep up with the rif raf and do what I love just so people can see that
that I am ME and nobody can take my brains away from me thank you for listening I hope you learn to love me!!!
It is really nice actually
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Old 12-12-2017, 10:34 AM View Post #4 (Link)
Dav145 (Offline)
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I agree with the previous answers. The post is truely good.
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