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09-06-2017, 01:53 AM
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Join Date: Sep 2017
Location: Somewhere in the Pacific Ocean.
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I know you soothed my suffering all day
I know you said that I would be okay But what about now What about now What about now What do you say now? I know you said "Don't worry, you won't die" I know you said I wouldn't have to say goodbye But what about now What about now What about now What do you say now? When I see you My heart brightens at the sight When I see you There's a temporary light When I see you The fog is washed away You say I will be okay I know you were there throughout my pain I know you were there day after day But what about now What about now What about now Where are you now? I know you were there when I could only cry I know you were there when I thought I'd die But what about now What about now What about now Where are you now? When I see you My heart brightens at the sight When I see you There's a temporary light When I see you The fog is washed away You say I will be okay I will be okay I will be okay |
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09-07-2017, 09:53 PM
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Join Date: May 2017
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In this one, I like both the emotion and the repetitiveness.
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