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Old 06-16-2017, 04:31 PM View Post #1 (Link) I had a dream
Charlotte S (Offline)
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How do we get through to those who have only one aim?
An aim to kill and maim,
All those unlike them, black or white,
All those who have a different religion, doesn't matter if they are wrong or right.

Can I please tell you about a dream
One I had the other night, after I saw what the bombs all mean
I had a dream, that this world could be seen differently,
And there are changes that can be made aplenty.

You could tell me this is actually the best our world has been
It's actually the worst I have ever seen
Because I had a dream, late at night
Where I saw people united as one, black and white.

There is a joy that is missing from our's been missing for a time
And I can't see the reason or rhyme
So listen to me, while I tell you about my dream
About the wonderful world I believe can be seen.
Be awesome.
Live your dream.
Do whatever you need to do to achieve your goals.
Remember, you're amazing no matter what!!

Also, if you want me to critique some of your writing VM or PM me.
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