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Old 05-30-2016, 05:33 PM View Post #11 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Darth Cerberus View Post
Could someone critique my writing...?

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/forumdisplay.php?f=46
Do you mean you'd like a critique in general, or a live critique in the chatroom? If you mean a live critique, just let us know when you'd be available! Or pop into the chatroom and we'll see if we can catch each other.

If you mean a critique just in general, heads up that it often takes a few days for people to see and get a chance to respond. But... considering you joined like a year ago you probably know that. Welcome back!
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Old 05-30-2016, 07:20 PM View Post #12 (Link)
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A live critique, please.
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Old 05-30-2016, 07:28 PM View Post #13 (Link)
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Sweet! I'll be around most of today and also tomorrow evening (It's 2:30 pm now) so feel free to drop in.
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Old 05-30-2016, 07:37 PM View Post #14 (Link)
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We can just start now?
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Old 05-30-2016, 08:08 PM View Post #15 (Link)
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Yep, sure-- do you know how to find the chatroom?
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Old 05-30-2016, 09:20 PM View Post #16 (Link)
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Yup.
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Old 12-19-2016, 03:05 PM View Post #17 (Link)
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I'm very much interested..it's a great idea.
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Old 10-25-2017, 01:09 PM View Post #18 (Link) Welcome
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Originally Posted by lalodragon View Post
So, you think that we like things more when we write a review for them?

That's often true.
Hi, nice to meet you!
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