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Old 06-28-2016, 11:50 AM View Post #1 (Link) Give it an end you like...😉
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He crept stealthily into Zara's room.... Something he had been planning to do for long... She was fast asleep... So was everyone else... So it was the perfect moment to...
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Originally Posted by #iamsecretlyjuliette View Post
He crept stealthily into Zara's room.... Something he had been planning to do for long... She was fast asleep... So was everyone else... So it was the perfect moment to...


He crept stealthily into Zara's room which was dark and gloomy, and it was very convenient for the fulfilling the idea of kissing her. Something he had been planning to do for long, in fact since he was four years old and she was three.. She was fast asleep... So was everyone else... So it was the perfect moment to kiss her and he approached her on tip-toe.
He heard her slow breathing, he bent over her and kissed her on the cheek. In fear to be captured on the crime scene he left deftly her room, leaving no smoking gun whatever.
Next morning during the breakfast his Granny said " What a nice dream I had this night. Very young and lovely guy kissed me on the cheek. I think this is because I slept in Zara's bedroom."
"Wait, Granny," he exclaimed. "Where's Zara?"
" You didn't know?" Granny asked in astonishment. "Zara went to a trip through Europe yesterday. She is going to return next week. Oh, my boy, why are you so pale? Are you ill?"
"I'm fine, Granny," he answered. "Not so happy as I was ten minutes ago, but I'm fine."
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Old 06-28-2016, 03:02 PM View Post #3 (Link) #georgy's ending...
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It WAS a humorous ending...😂
I don't know if you have or not but.. This kind of portion is an important element of typical Bollywood movies...
It was really fun reading it...😊
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