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Old 08-24-2013, 05:42 AM View Post #1 (Link) July Spotlight
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Thanks for submitting, yo. Give these pieces love and critiques! If it's a threadbox VM or PM the author.

Short Stories:

"Party Favours" by Infinity Man

"Chess" by Derezzination

Novel Chapters:

The ChadMan's Story Ch. 1

Experimental/Other:

"Blizzard" by Ean

Poetry:

"Your Skin Gets Thinner the Longer It's There" by Niente

"Madame Pluie and the Hours" by bookworm
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Old 08-24-2013, 11:27 AM View Post #2 (Link)
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Daw, thanks guys! And congrats to Derezzination, The ChadMan, Ean, Niente, and bookworm!
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Pro-tip: because my first instinct is to procrastinate anything I see as an obligation or responsibility, asking me for a critique is a good way to make sure I never give you a critique.
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Old 08-24-2013, 02:53 PM View Post #3 (Link)
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Thank you!
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Old 08-24-2013, 03:49 PM View Post #4 (Link)
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Thank you so much, I forgot that poem even existed!
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Originally Posted by Samuel Beckett, Worstward Ho
The void. Before the staring eyes. Stare where they may. Far and wide. High and low. That narrow field. Know no more. See no more. Say no more. That alone. That little much of void alone.
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Old 08-26-2013, 04:08 PM View Post #5 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Stephen King's 11/22/63
In my life as a teacher, I used to hammer away at the idea of simplicity. In both fiction and nonfiction, there's only one question and one answer. What happened? the reader asks. This is what happened, the writer responds. This. . . and this . . . and this, too. Keep it simple. It's the only sure way home.
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