If I Could [a softer song]

Lane · 04-16-2012, 08:36 PM

re working the song..

Catcher09 · 04-17-2012, 02:13 AM

That was really good!

I like the lyrics and the harmony part in the middle of the song. Were you playing the guitar in the video?

Lane · 04-17-2012, 03:03 AM

thanks Catcher09 for taking the time to have a look, I wrote the lyric and melody.
I tried to keep the lyric simple, and finished the song in acoustic. that was simple and I thought
was fitting for the write. thanks again Lane

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Catcher09 Idea Scribe Join Date: Mar 2012 Posts: 51 Points: 21.3 Times Thanked: 1	That was really good! I like the lyrics and the harmony part in the middle of the song. Were you playing the guitar in the video? __________________ "Bow ties are cool!" "I wear a stetson now. Stetsons are cool." "Fezzes are cool!" "Let's go and poke it with a stick." - Matt Smith, 11th Doctor Who

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Lane Novice Writer Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: a bit north of Nashville Posts: 10 Points: 11.86 Times Thanked: 2	re working the song..

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Lane Novice Writer Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: a bit north of Nashville Posts: 10 Points: 11.86 Times Thanked: 2	thanks Catcher09 for taking the time to have a look, I wrote the lyric and melody. I tried to keep the lyric simple, and finished the song in acoustic. that was simple and I thought was fitting for the write. thanks again Lane