Ladies and Gentlemen, for one week only...

Clarissa · 02-13-2012, 05:24 PM

Hi, I'm back. Ish. Basically, it's the holidays and I have found myself with absolutely nothing to do. Besides, I kind of missed you guys, a lot. So, for one week only, I'm going to be here.

I like prose. Lots and lots of prose. Normally I specify short stories because my critiques are so long I turn them into 10000 word documents (no, don't be scared, that's a good thing). I'm honest, often brutally so. If you can take it, come get it.

This is starting to sound like a lonely hearts ad or something. I don't want a date, I just want your writing.

Anyway, link it to me here (or on facebook) and I'll do my best.

Do it, please. Not that I'm desperate or anything.

Also, much love <3

Jose · 02-13-2012, 06:31 PM

Here’s a short (half) story I wrote. Sorry you have to go through the torture of critiquing it. Honestly, I don’t know where the story is going. Thank you.

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=8013

Rose · 02-13-2012, 06:39 PM

you. this.

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/sh...152#post143152

♥

Clarissa · 02-13-2012, 08:00 PM

Expect them both tomorrow (hopefully), since they're both delightfully short. Thank you guys

02-13-2012, 05:24 PM	View Post #1 (Link) Ladies and Gentlemen, for one week only...
Clarissa Literary Artist Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Having breakfast at Tiffany's Posts: 396 Points: 30 Times Thanked: 39	Hi, I'm back. Ish. Basically, it's the holidays and I have found myself with absolutely nothing to do. Besides, I kind of missed you guys, a lot. So, for one week only, I'm going to be here. I like prose. Lots and lots of prose. Normally I specify short stories because my critiques are so long I turn them into 10000 word documents (no, don't be scared, that's a good thing). I'm honest, often brutally so. If you can take it, come get it. This is starting to sound like a lonely hearts ad or something. I don't want a date, I just want your writing. Anyway, link it to me here (or on facebook) and I'll do my best. Do it, please. Not that I'm desperate or anything. Also, much love <3 __________________ One flew East, One flew West, One flew over the Cuckoo's nest Truth is Beauty and Beauty is Truth. (Keats) When you've looked and looked, and have found nothing better to do: Read it and weep

02-13-2012, 08:00 PM	View Post #4 (Link) This post is a reply - don't critique it
Clarissa Literary Artist Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Having breakfast at Tiffany's Posts: 396 Points: 30 Times Thanked: 39	Expect them both tomorrow (hopefully), since they're both delightfully short. Thank you guys __________________ One flew East, One flew West, One flew over the Cuckoo's nest Truth is Beauty and Beauty is Truth. (Keats) When you've looked and looked, and have found nothing better to do: Read it and weep