Need a critique?

GeorgeMichael · 01-01-2012, 09:22 AM

If anyone would like a critique feel free to ask me and I'll do my best to quickly (I have nothing to do but write and read on this vacation) get to your story. I love reading all types of stories be it fantasy or realistic but please don't ask me to critique poetry. I would love to read it but I can't say that I would be able to give a very worthy critique on it.

SugarInkling · 01-02-2012, 05:35 PM

Hello!

If you could actually critique my story "Kirsten in Wonderland" that would be awesome. I posted it yesterday and can't wait to get feedback! Please and thank you!

Write on!
-SugarInkling

01-01-2012, 09:22 AM	View Post #1 (Link) Need a critique?
GeorgeMichael Freelance Writer Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: No longer in a boring city! Posts: 1,434 Points: 7.3 Times Thanked: 54	If anyone would like a critique feel free to ask me and I'll do my best to quickly (I have nothing to do but write and read on this vacation) get to your story. I love reading all types of stories be it fantasy or realistic but please don't ask me to critique poetry. I would love to read it but I can't say that I would be able to give a very worthy critique on it. __________________ Reading List for January Salem's Lot - Stephen King A Game of Thrones - GRRM The Lost Symbol - Dan Brown If anyone is wondering, my boyfriend's internet is the absolute worst piece of shit in existence, and it causes my computer to slow down significantly anytime I enter the Chatroom. It also causes the chatroom to freeze anyway, so it's a bit futile to attempt to log in while I'm at his place.

01-02-2012, 05:35 PM	View Post #2 (Link) Critique Please!
SugarInkling Literary Newbie Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: The Magical World of Derpland Posts: 9 Points: 5 Times Thanked: 1	Hello! If you could actually critique my story "Kirsten in Wonderland" that would be awesome. I posted it yesterday and can't wait to get feedback! Please and thank you! Write on! -SugarInkling