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Old 05-30-2010, 11:09 AM View Post #1 (Link) Mixed Media Photos
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Just putting them out there. Compared to some of the photos I've seen on here I don't think they're that great, but hey, what are you gonna do?







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Old 05-30-2010, 07:30 PM View Post #2 (Link)
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I like the bird pictures particularly the first one. The first two are poorly lighted and the color is dull. I think you have potentail. The more you work at it I think the better you'll get.
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Old 05-31-2010, 04:00 PM View Post #3 (Link) nice photos
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I like the first one, but it is a bit too dark. If you have an editing program, you may want to copy this and play with the brightness and contrast to get a lighter (but still the same) picture.
I really like the second one, can't put my finger on why, though. I love the angle and how the viewer can see each handhold, as well as the incorporation of the sky. Great photo.
I like the third one because of the colors, they are vibrant and really capture one's attention. I wish you had caught the bird at a different moment, something a bit more regal or graceful, but I suppose that really isn't relevant.
I don't really like the last one, there is a lack of creativity and artistic flare. It is simply a picture of two birds on the ground, though cute, not a very professional photograph.
You have real potential, like v.w.123 said. I suggest playing with angles and the focus of your camera to get more visually dynamic shots, so keep taking pictures! Overall, nice photos!
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Old 05-31-2010, 04:01 PM View Post #4 (Link)
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The first one is very ordinary. There is nothing special in this photo except the size is a little big.

The second one is lovely! I just loved it! I didn't get what the things are actually but whatever it is, the picture is really very nice. Perfect angle and unique photo.

The third one is also nice. It is looking good because of its soothing green background.

The fourth one is not bad but not good also. The angle is perfect but the background of this picture is looking a bit dull.

I hope I've helped you
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Old 12-11-2011, 09:07 AM View Post #5 (Link) srox,
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Originally Posted by Kari View Post
Just putting them out there. Compared to some of the photos I've seen on here I don't think they're that great, but hey, what are you gonna do?







Your photos are really nice ones......
just keep in mind that if the second photo would have been taken from front then it would have been nicer
 
Old 12-11-2011, 09:13 AM View Post #6 (Link)
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This thread was created over one and a half years ago. The most recent post is from over one and a half years ago. Use your common sense. Like seriously.
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