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Old 07-28-2010, 01:16 AM View Post #1 (Link) Heyy, Im new :D xxx
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Heyy guys! I'm new to this forum ! ive been writing a book and i would really love to get to know people and i have been writing a book recently and want to publish it and i want people to read it, is tehre anything i can do? xxxxxxxxxxxxx thanks!
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Old 07-28-2010, 01:22 AM View Post #2 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Afzaa.T View Post
is tehre anything i can do?
Capitalize your "I"s, spell check, and use proper grammar. We like to see if you can go the distance to make a good impression.

Anyway, welcome.
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Originally Posted by Caleb
when I hear the word poet

I think of you naked, rimbaud drinking, and how lovely my hair is


They sailed away, for a year and a day,
To the land where the bong-tree grows;
And there in a wood a Piggy-wig stood,
With a ring at the end of his nose,

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Old 07-28-2010, 01:24 AM View Post #3 (Link)
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Originally Posted by AliceGriffin View Post
Capitalize your "I"s, spell check, and use proper grammar. We like to see if you can go the distance to make a good impression.

Anyway, welcome.
Thankyou
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Old 07-28-2010, 02:01 AM View Post #4 (Link)
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I assume when you wrote Manchester you meant the Manchester of England, correct?

Anywho, as Alice said, follow the rules by using correct capitalization, punctuation, grammar in general, and spelling. As for being repetitive, I think we get it. Whatever, it's nice to meet you and all that jazz. I'm Will, and if you need anything, VM/PM me or someone else, okay?

Also... *snaps on the interrogation light*
Do you like to read?
What do you like to write?
What genre is your book?
Who's your favorite author?
What's your favorite color?
Name the first word that comes to mind when I say beach.
You have the right to remain silent. Anything you say, can and will be used against you in the court of law. You have the right to an attorney. If you cannot afford one, one will be appointed to you by the state. *is a really corny joke maker* Welcome! xD
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Old 07-28-2010, 06:13 AM View Post #5 (Link)
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Originally Posted by thecollector View Post
I assume when you wrote Manchester you meant the Manchester of England, correct?

Anywho, as Alice said, follow the rules by using correct capitalization, punctuation, grammar in general, and spelling. As for being repetitive, I think we get it. Whatever, it's nice to meet you and all that jazz. I'm Will, and if you need anything, VM/PM me or someone else, okay?

Also... *snaps on the interrogation light*
Do you like to read?Yes a bit you?
What do you like to write? Poems and novels, you?
What genre is your book? Romantic horror XD
Who's your favorite author?Dont' really have one, you?
What's your favorite color? It changes everyday :p, you?
Name the first word that comes to mind when I say beach. Sleep
You have the right to remain silent. Anything you say, can and will be used against you in the court of law. You have the right to an attorney. If you cannot afford one, one will be appointed to you by the state. *is a really corny joke maker* Welcome! xD
Thanks for a very warm welcome Will nice to meet you
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Old 07-28-2010, 06:59 AM View Post #6 (Link)
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Ah, another poet! Glad to meet your acquaintance! I'd love to sample some of your works! I love critiquing, and I'd be happy to help you become and even better poet. =] So how's about it?

Welcome to YWO!
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Old 07-28-2010, 11:48 PM View Post #7 (Link)
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Originally Posted by Silver_Poet View Post
Ah, another poet! Glad to meet your acquaintance! I'd love to sample some of your works! I love critiquing, and I'd be happy to help you become and even better poet. =] So how's about it?

Welcome to YWO!
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Thankyou And yes of course you may critique! thankyou
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