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Old 12-20-2017, 07:13 PM View Post #6 (Link)
Rare.Cakezz (Offline)
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I enjoyed the first chapter of this story, I'm looking forward to the next few. But I highly suggest that you add in more detail. I understand that to you it may be seems like you can see the image you are portraying. But to an outsider all I can do is read it, I'm not quite seeing it.
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