Thread: Free to fall
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Old 12-06-2015, 05:23 AM View Post #5 (Link)
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Can feel a nice rhythm and openness in it. A certain degree of freshness coming right at you. Could help if you could just add a few more lines for it to flow to a higher extent. But overall, good job, man!
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