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Old 01-01-2018, 10:48 AM View Post #3 (Link) This post is a reply - don't critique it
Rebekah (Offline)
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Hi Keladry,

Thank you so much for your critique.
You raised a good point, I completely forgot not everyone was English! Oops! In England, you take your GSCE's at the end of year 11, so Alex and Meg are 16.
I like that you have left questions you should find out if you read the rest of the chapters. I could probably post chapter 2 today.
I'll definitely research some artwork, thanks for giving me some more information.
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A note to everyone else reading Chapter one, I have now edited it slightly.

Finally if you want to read more of Our week of Freedom, check out Novels (realistic) and hopefully I would of posted some more chapters by then.
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