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Old 12-21-2017, 03:01 AM View Post #3 (Link) Impacting Poem
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This is an amazing poem. I love the verse at the end, about the closet, I feel like that is a very good way to explain what that would feel like. I don't know if it's the point to not know about the narrator, but I feel like revealing who the narrator is, would help the reader to understand the perspective better. And it is really sad that these things do go on in our world today, but I feel like you did an amazing job on this hard topic. I really enjoyed it, please write more!
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