Thread: Free to fall
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Old 12-18-2017, 11:26 AM View Post #6 (Link)
Chips (Offline)
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Right, to start off with, I liked it. The rhyming was good and the chorus was catchy. The way you described how you or whomever this is from's feelings and emotion was well done but could be improved on in some ways. All in all, I liked it and I encourage you to keep writing!
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