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Old 11-30-2017, 08:22 AM View Post #5 (Link)
Charlotte S (Offline)
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This is a good piece of writing. I myself am deep in research about slavery, both modern day and that of 150 years ago. You are right, slavery is still around, however, I would suggest doing research into it. For starters most homeless children taken don't have friends or family as, that way, it easy for them to be missed and forgotten. No one knows them and thus won't care. Also, 5-7 is a minimal amount of work compared to some slaves and some slaves don't get fed.

This was a great piece of work, though I would suggest researching the subject further. if you don't want to be subjected to the stuff on the internet, feel free to contact me and I can answer any questions you have on the matter.

Anyways, I digress. This was a good piece of writing and has the potential to be something amazing.
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