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Old 11-27-2017, 06:55 AM View Post #2 (Link)
aa_y_ush (Offline)
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Wonderful portrayal. This is saddening that, yes, our society is constantly nagging and molesting females in weird fashions.
I would have needed a little more metaphors or explanations when you quoted "I don't want you to be a hero". Although, each and every person on this platform would have had a great emphasis on themselves because of this line, a little more play hear would have added a great deal of heat.

Elsewise, what a perfect piece of poetry. I felt every single line. A job well done. Congratulations.
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