Thread: Guilt
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Old 11-26-2017, 10:11 PM View Post #5 (Link)
phoenixqueen (Offline)
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I was a bit confused at first, so the guy cheated on her and was kill by a beast? This cause the Guilt that permanently damage on her and she committed suicide later on? I think the story itself is interesting, but I would love it more if there is a bit more back story to it. Sort of like how they met, and why he cheated on her. Otherwise, it would be hard for me to care about the characters.
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