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Old 10-09-2017, 05:26 AM View Post #5 (Link)
Slave Prince (Offline)
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The suspense is really there. But it is low. Maybe because not one of the characters stands out, not even the main character.

Overall, I have the interest in reading the second part (if you write one).
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