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Old 09-24-2017, 03:33 PM View Post #4 (Link) Critiques
Miss.Tea (Offline)
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You did a good job. I really liked it. To me it was very vague and i couldn't understand the plot much. I couldn't figure out the back story on the guy. Why did they call the cops so early and what was the guy looking for besides her, like what did he want. But anyways besides that you did a good job
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