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Old 05-15-2017, 12:39 AM View Post #4 (Link) Critique for "A Twilight to The Midnight"
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Your title interested me to read your short story, and I'm glad I did because it was mixture of interesting, beautiful, sad. I loved the imagery and vivid details you used to describe the scene and what the main character was thinking. Near the end of the story, however, I don't quite understand why the point of view repeatedly changed from first person to third person views. I also want to know more about what happens at 4 A.M. Tuesdays.
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