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			<title>Monsters Ball</title>
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			<description>Not my first foray into the world of poetry, and likely not my best. However, it IS my most recent, and thus it is here for you all to view/butcher. Enjoy!


It all began so very young,
Those memories that we have hung
Within our mind from wall to wall;
The ambience of the monsters ball. 

We lurk, so very commonplace
A lie hiding in every face
And through our sins we will stand tall
Unflinching hosts of the monsters ball.

A grin for every scream of pain
Perversion your true price of fame.
Their sobs are trailing down the hall;
Music from the monsters ball.

Sometimes, I truly wondered now
Why, when, where, and how 
You smile easily through it all;
Always at home in the monsters ball.

The others are all tortured souls
Disease eroding at their whole,
Their lives are moving at a crawl;
Servants in the monsters ball. 


Our crimes are many, numerous;
A bullet for the best of us
Is well deserved straight through our skulls.
An end to every monsters ball. 

And if you think our mind can mend,
Know that really, in the end
The hellish cycle never stalls
An all eternal
Monsters ball. </description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div>Not my first foray into the world of poetry, and likely not my best. However, it IS my most recent, and thus it is here for you all to view/butcher. Enjoy!<br />
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It all began so very young,<br />
Those memories that we have hung<br />
Within our mind from wall to wall;<br />
The ambience of the monsters ball. <br />
<br />
We lurk, so very commonplace<br />
A lie hiding in every face<br />
And through our sins we will stand tall<br />
Unflinching hosts of the monsters ball.<br />
<br />
A grin for every scream of pain<br />
Perversion your true price of fame.<br />
Their sobs are trailing down the hall;<br />
Music from the monsters ball.<br />
<br />
Sometimes, I truly wondered now<br />
Why, when, where, and how <br />
You smile easily through it all;<br />
Always at home in the monsters ball.<br />
<br />
The others are all tortured souls<br />
Disease eroding at their whole,<br />
Their lives are moving at a crawl;<br />
Servants in the monsters ball. <br />
<br />
<br />
Our crimes are many, numerous;<br />
A bullet for the best of us<br />
Is well deserved straight through our skulls.<br />
An end to every monsters ball. <br />
<br />
And if you think our mind can mend,<br />
Know that really, in the end<br />
The hellish cycle never stalls<br />
An all eternal<br />
Monsters ball. </div></div></div></div>

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			<title>Hey People</title>
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			<pubDate>Thu, 17 May 2012 21:17:17 GMT</pubDate>
			<description><![CDATA[I'm new here to YWO. Just decided to stop by and say hello. Look forward to reading stories and having others read mine.

-The Human]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div>I'm new here to YWO. Just decided to stop by and say hello. Look forward to reading stories and having others read mine.<br />
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-The Human</div>

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			<title>Detour</title>
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			<pubDate>Thu, 17 May 2012 20:37:54 GMT</pubDate>
			<description><![CDATA[Been a while since I've written anything. This is my tentative-and highly experimental, given my lack of previous work in the second person-dive back into the world of writing.

Technically, this was planned to be the opening to a short story. But knowing me, it'll likely turn into a novel, or a sort of miniseries at least. Read, enjoy, and then tear it to tiny little pieces. Constructively of course :)

Note: This IS in the second person, a perspective which some people find rather daunting. Bear that in mind while reading and critiquing. 

***


You sit quietly on the corner of 15th and Breach Street, feasting your eyes on the comings and goings of The Commune just before dawn. It’s a quaint, deceptive sight that almost fools you into thinking that all inside you is calm, peaceful, and normal.

The loaded shotgun sitting on the table next to you in a worn violin case speaks otherwise. 

Perrine’s is possibly the best crêpe shop on this side of The Commune’s private paradise. The food is hardly your main reason for visiting; you’ve spent many an evening on this lonely street corner, quietly listening to dull roar of massive propellers deep into the night, convinced that every once in a while, you can hear the hellish noise of the ravaged landscape far below.  

Gunshots are a common noise in your mind, borne from years fighting for survival on the surface. Your brother rescued you from all that ages ago, but somehow it keeps coming back to haunt you. 

Haunt? The wrong word, likely. 

It wasn’t always terrible…When the war began, you’d expected that life would be little more than a frantic race from one shattered pile of rubble to the next, eking out a pitiful existence from the broken land. The truth was a bit of a shock when you finally realized it.

Adventure. 

Your life in the Hellscape had been a series of constant frantic encounters blending seamlessly into a story worthy of legend. Perhaps it was your companions, your own resourcefulness, or even a unique combination of the two, but no matter where you strayed, life was something you lived to its wild fullest. 

The sound of bullets; It haunts you because you miss it sometimes, imagining that your back in the blackened streets of London running from the burning remains of a successfully demolished Syndicate barracks with a shit-eating grin stretched wide across your sweat soaked face. Grinning as you tie a makeshift blindfold fashioned from a torn bit of dress around your face for one of your crew’s more…Unusual drinking games. Up here, alcohol and merriment come in short supply; a by-product of the commune’s fierce disciplinary policies. 

You understand, and even admire the efficiency given by the rules so rigidly enforced here, but the blaring noise of a loudspeaker announcing a curfew you’ll likely never honor only serves to remind you of those moments spent deep beneath the earth, huddled drunk with friends you’d fight the entire world to protect.

Fight the world…most certainly not empty words, in your case. It’s a part of the reason why you’ve never been outright forced to conform to the ‘guidelines’ held by The Commune; you’re something of a legend. You are the sole reason for Skyfleet’s successful annexation of the shattered continent, and thus the reason Skyfleet’s floating cities remain safe, secure, and airborne. 

You hold the secret to a power that broke the world, and saved mankind.

So yes. You are now a hero.

Whoop de fucking doo. It’s boring as hell. 
Boring as heaven actually; Skyfleet’s cities are pristine in their beauty and splendour, a true paradise for those weary of the ravages of a war-torn earth. You understand why your mother, brother, and sister find this place such a godsend. Frankly, you can hardly understand why you don’t find it more enthralling. Shouldn’t you be more grateful for such a haven of peace and harmony after facing such a rampantly dangerous life on the surface? 

You should. You really should. But you can’t help but miss the coppery bitterness of blood on your lip after a particularly nasty gunfight, or the wild abandon of losing yourself in a night of senseless debauchery. 

None of that up here; you’re a hero now, and the role model to the rather impressionable remains of a shattered world. You can’t afford to break away from perfection in pursuit of the life you once led.

Not here. 

That’s why you’re going back to the Hellscape. The Commune’s been good to you, no mistake, but it’s time you got off this massive hunk of metal and back into that wild world you thrived in. 

A lone figure strides down the empty street towards you, cello case held awkwardly in both hands. You smile. Marco had always seemed far too small for the somewhat extravagant weapons he enjoyed most, but none could deny that he used them well. 

You wonder for a moment if perhaps the whole ‘guns in instrument cases’ bit is a tad bit too cliché for your comfort. No matter; you make your best ‘music’ on the battlefield. The somewhat strange weapons casing makes sense in that regard.

A hand raised casually to your lips paints them cherry red. Taking a moment to adjust your dress so as not to give poor Marco a heart attack, you brush a stray lock of curly brown hair from your face and grin with the same ferocious joy you remember feeling back in hell itself. 

Life has been confined to the strictly straight and narrow for far too long now; it’s time to take a detour.

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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div>Been a while since I've written anything. This is my tentative-and highly experimental, given my lack of previous work in the second person-dive back into the world of writing.<br />
<br />
Technically, this was planned to be the opening to a short story. But knowing me, it'll likely turn into a novel, or a sort of miniseries at least. Read, enjoy, and then tear it to tiny little pieces. Constructively of course :)<br />
<br />
Note: This IS in the second person, a perspective which some people find rather daunting. Bear that in mind while reading and critiquing. <br />
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You sit quietly on the corner of 15th and Breach Street, feasting your eyes on the comings and goings of The Commune just before dawn. It’s a quaint, deceptive sight that almost fools you into thinking that all inside you is calm, peaceful, and normal.<br />
<br />
The loaded shotgun sitting on the table next to you in a worn violin case speaks otherwise. <br />
<br />
Perrine’s is possibly the best crêpe shop on this side of The Commune’s private paradise. The food is hardly your main reason for visiting; you’ve spent many an evening on this lonely street corner, quietly listening to dull roar of massive propellers deep into the night, convinced that every once in a while, you can hear the hellish noise of the ravaged landscape far below.  <br />
<br />
Gunshots are a common noise in your mind, borne from years fighting for survival on the surface. Your brother rescued you from all that ages ago, but somehow it keeps coming back to haunt you. <br />
<br />
Haunt? The wrong word, likely. <br />
<br />
It wasn’t always terrible…When the war began, you’d expected that life would be little more than a frantic race from one shattered pile of rubble to the next, eking out a pitiful existence from the broken land. The truth was a bit of a shock when you finally realized it.<br />
<br />
Adventure. <br />
<br />
Your life in the Hellscape had been a series of constant frantic encounters blending seamlessly into a story worthy of legend. Perhaps it was your companions, your own resourcefulness, or even a unique combination of the two, but no matter where you strayed, life was something you lived to its wild fullest. <br />
<br />
The sound of bullets; It haunts you because you miss it sometimes, imagining that your back in the blackened streets of London running from the burning remains of a successfully demolished Syndicate barracks with a shit-eating grin stretched wide across your sweat soaked face. Grinning as you tie a makeshift blindfold fashioned from a torn bit of dress around your face for one of your crew’s more…Unusual drinking games. Up here, alcohol and merriment come in short supply; a by-product of the commune’s fierce disciplinary policies. <br />
<br />
You understand, and even admire the efficiency given by the rules so rigidly enforced here, but the blaring noise of a loudspeaker announcing a curfew you’ll likely never honor only serves to remind you of those moments spent deep beneath the earth, huddled drunk with friends you’d fight the entire world to protect.<br />
<br />
Fight the world…most certainly not empty words, in your case. It’s a part of the reason why you’ve never been outright forced to conform to the ‘guidelines’ held by The Commune; you’re something of a legend. You are the sole reason for Skyfleet’s successful annexation of the shattered continent, and thus the reason Skyfleet’s floating cities remain safe, secure, and airborne. <br />
<br />
You hold the secret to a power that broke the world, and saved mankind.<br />
<br />
So yes. You are now a hero.<br />
<br />
Whoop de fucking doo. It’s boring as hell. <br />
Boring as heaven actually; Skyfleet’s cities are pristine in their beauty and splendour, a true paradise for those weary of the ravages of a war-torn earth. You understand why your mother, brother, and sister find this place such a godsend. Frankly, you can hardly understand why you don’t find it more enthralling. Shouldn’t you be more grateful for such a haven of peace and harmony after facing such a rampantly dangerous life on the surface? <br />
<br />
You should. You really should. But you can’t help but miss the coppery bitterness of blood on your lip after a particularly nasty gunfight, or the wild abandon of losing yourself in a night of senseless debauchery. <br />
<br />
None of that up here; you’re a hero now, and the role model to the rather impressionable remains of a shattered world. You can’t afford to break away from perfection in pursuit of the life you once led.<br />
<br />
Not here. <br />
<br />
That’s why you’re going back to the Hellscape. The Commune’s been good to you, no mistake, but it’s time you got off this massive hunk of metal and back into that wild world you thrived in. <br />
<br />
A lone figure strides down the empty street towards you, cello case held awkwardly in both hands. You smile. Marco had always seemed far too small for the somewhat extravagant weapons he enjoyed most, but none could deny that he used them well. <br />
<br />
You wonder for a moment if perhaps the whole ‘guns in instrument cases’ bit is a tad bit too cliché for your comfort. No matter; you make your best ‘music’ on the battlefield. The somewhat strange weapons casing makes sense in that regard.<br />
<br />
A hand raised casually to your lips paints them cherry red. Taking a moment to adjust your dress so as not to give poor Marco a heart attack, you brush a stray lock of curly brown hair from your face and grin with the same ferocious joy you remember feeling back in hell itself. <br />
<br />
Life has been confined to the strictly straight and narrow for far too long now; it’s time to take a detour.<br />
<br />
</div></div></div></div>

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			<title>The Heart of Life</title>
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			<pubDate>Thu, 17 May 2012 19:06:35 GMT</pubDate>
			<description><![CDATA[~Chapter 2~

I can clearly remember that Friday morning. Everything had happened after Austin had dropped me off at my house&#8230; 

Austin had been driving home and of course you&#8217;d never expect anything to happen to Austin right? I mean, he&#8217;s Austin! The brown &#8220;whooshy haired&#8221; athlete, who excels in almost everything and is wicked responsible? He helps everyone, and is so caring. But he was the one to be cursed with that tragic fate.

It was 8:45 in the morning. I was in my 1st period math class. I was bored to death because I knew everything that was going on. Then the assistant principal walked into our class and asked Mr. Spears, our math teacher, to say something for a minute.

He then looked around the room and made eye contact with me and said, &#8220;Austin is in the hospital unconscious. They don&#8217;t know what he has or what&#8217;s going to happen yet.&#8221; I yelped and said, &#8220;OH MY GOSH, NO!&#8221; and I sprinted out of that room faster than anyone has ever seen me run. I left the school and ran to the hospital. My legs were aching and I was afraid. But I remembered what Austin had told me, &#8220;Fear is just a friend who&#8217;s misunderstood.&#8221; But right now, that did not help me.

I was panting like, well actually probably worse, than a dog when I bolted through the hospital doors. I ran in shouting, &#8220;Where&#8217;s Austin? Where is he?!&#8221; I looked around frantically and in every window of the doors. He was in the children&#8217;s emergency room so I wasn&#8217;t disturbing TOO many people.

Then I saw him. I swear I stopped breathing and I just stared. He was hooked up to so many different machines. It barely looked like he was breathing! His parents were by his bed crying. And I felt tears pricking my eyes. And I slowly walked in accompanied by a nurse. His parents rushed over to me and gave me a huge hug when they laid eyes on me.

I saw his beautiful face lying in a few bandages. He had a small scrape on his forehead which was actually bleeding a lot. He had a bandage on his jaw line and you could see blood seeping through it. I felt, heartbroken seeing him like this. I see all these machines that he&#8217;s hooked up to and one of them says that his heart rate is only 60 beats per minute. I was scared and shaking. They said the nurses put him in a coma for his own good.

I knelt down beside him and held his hand. His breathing was slow and his hand was cold. His mom, Sally, told me that when you talk to him he can still hear it and it was probably good to do. I pulled over a chair and then I sat down with his hands wrapped in my hands and pressed against my forehead. His parents left the room for us so we could have a couple minutes. I was grateful for that.

I started talking about all of our memories and laughing to myself about them. Then when I&#8217;d think about them and his situation I&#8217;d cry. If only he had stayed at our house a little bit longer. Why couldn&#8217;t I of asked him to stay with us? Why couldn&#8217;t my dad persuade him to stay? Why didn&#8217;t he just accept? Everything would be so much more different if he had just stayed with us for 5 simple more minutes.

I got up and wiped my eyes from the tears. I kissed him on the cheek and got a ride to my house from his father, Joe. I asked him to keep the car idling and I got all my clothes and stuff that I would need. When I got in the car Joe looked at me questionably, but then understood what I was thinking and nodded his head. Then we went back to the hospital. And I slept over at the hospital with him for a week.

I got my homework every day and it was a pretty hectic week for me, but it was all worth it.

Then the day came. I was up with him; talking as well as his mother and father. It was just a memory conversation, but then, we heard the beeping stop. I didn&#8217;t grasp what happened and then, I stopped breathing for at least 5 minutes, or so it felt. His mom started sobbing and I did too. His father was choking back tears but then, when Sally embraced him, he stated sobbing as well.

I had just seen the most important person in my life die; right in front of my eyes.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div>~Chapter 2~<br />
<br />
I can clearly remember that Friday morning. Everything had happened after Austin had dropped me off at my house&#8230; <br />
<br />
Austin had been driving home and of course you&#8217;d never expect anything to happen to Austin right? I mean, he&#8217;s Austin! The brown &#8220;whooshy haired&#8221; athlete, who excels in almost everything and is wicked responsible? He helps everyone, and is so caring. But he was the one to be cursed with that tragic fate.<br />
<br />
It was 8:45 in the morning. I was in my 1st period math class. I was bored to death because I knew everything that was going on. Then the assistant principal walked into our class and asked Mr. Spears, our math teacher, to say something for a minute.<br />
<br />
He then looked around the room and made eye contact with me and said, &#8220;Austin is in the hospital unconscious. They don&#8217;t know what he has or what&#8217;s going to happen yet.&#8221; I yelped and said, &#8220;OH MY GOSH, NO!&#8221; and I sprinted out of that room faster than anyone has ever seen me run. I left the school and ran to the hospital. My legs were aching and I was afraid. But I remembered what Austin had told me, &#8220;Fear is just a friend who&#8217;s misunderstood.&#8221; But right now, that did not help me.<br />
<br />
I was panting like, well actually probably worse, than a dog when I bolted through the hospital doors. I ran in shouting, &#8220;Where&#8217;s Austin? Where is he?!&#8221; I looked around frantically and in every window of the doors. He was in the children&#8217;s emergency room so I wasn&#8217;t disturbing TOO many people.<br />
<br />
Then I saw him. I swear I stopped breathing and I just stared. He was hooked up to so many different machines. It barely looked like he was breathing! His parents were by his bed crying. And I felt tears pricking my eyes. And I slowly walked in accompanied by a nurse. His parents rushed over to me and gave me a huge hug when they laid eyes on me.<br />
<br />
I saw his beautiful face lying in a few bandages. He had a small scrape on his forehead which was actually bleeding a lot. He had a bandage on his jaw line and you could see blood seeping through it. I felt, heartbroken seeing him like this. I see all these machines that he&#8217;s hooked up to and one of them says that his heart rate is only 60 beats per minute. I was scared and shaking. They said the nurses put him in a coma for his own good.<br />
<br />
I knelt down beside him and held his hand. His breathing was slow and his hand was cold. His mom, Sally, told me that when you talk to him he can still hear it and it was probably good to do. I pulled over a chair and then I sat down with his hands wrapped in my hands and pressed against my forehead. His parents left the room for us so we could have a couple minutes. I was grateful for that.<br />
<br />
I started talking about all of our memories and laughing to myself about them. Then when I&#8217;d think about them and his situation I&#8217;d cry. If only he had stayed at our house a little bit longer. Why couldn&#8217;t I of asked him to stay with us? Why couldn&#8217;t my dad persuade him to stay? Why didn&#8217;t he just accept? Everything would be so much more different if he had just stayed with us for 5 simple more minutes.<br />
<br />
I got up and wiped my eyes from the tears. I kissed him on the cheek and got a ride to my house from his father, Joe. I asked him to keep the car idling and I got all my clothes and stuff that I would need. When I got in the car Joe looked at me questionably, but then understood what I was thinking and nodded his head. Then we went back to the hospital. And I slept over at the hospital with him for a week.<br />
<br />
I got my homework every day and it was a pretty hectic week for me, but it was all worth it.<br />
<br />
Then the day came. I was up with him; talking as well as his mother and father. It was just a memory conversation, but then, we heard the beeping stop. I didn&#8217;t grasp what happened and then, I stopped breathing for at least 5 minutes, or so it felt. His mom started sobbing and I did too. His father was choking back tears but then, when Sally embraced him, he stated sobbing as well.<br />
<br />
I had just seen the most important person in my life die; right in front of my eyes.</div>

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			<title>Life (Chapt. 1)</title>
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			<pubDate>Thu, 17 May 2012 18:37:11 GMT</pubDate>
			<description>Up…down…up…down. The bubbles in my lava lamp merge into one big bubble, then they part, jiggling.
When I’d put lava lamp on my Christmas wish list, dad had asked me what color I wanted. I remembered all five colors of lava lamps at Light Spectrum, a store that’s been a few blocks away for as long as I can remember.
“Teal, green, and pink.” I muttered to myself. I LOVE teal, teal has been my favorite color ever since I knew it existed.
Apparantly it’s a bunch of other people’s favorite color too, because they were all out, so dad got a pink one.
Tears well up in my eyes as I watch the two pink bubbles floating down again.
“Watcha doing?” My little brother asks in that annoying way he has. 
“None of your business” I turn off the last gift from my father.
My brother rubs the dust off of my newer sculptures like he does when he’s nervous. 
I blink the tears out of my eyes as I watch the now white bubbles floating down for the last time. At least, until I turn it back on again.
“Life is like that.” I sigh.
“What?” Eli asks. “Get your grubby hands off my sculptures!” I snap.
Eli crosses his arms angrily.
“Mommy says to be nice to me because daddy just died!” He says, as if this ends the conversation.
“Sister says you should be nice to her because daddy just died too!” I lead him out of my room and slam the door.
Then I take out my diary and write:

Life is like the bubbles in a lava lamp.

I look at the things before it. I’ve been writing Life Is Like poems ever since I read one in a book of poems mom bought me for my birthday. There are others:

Life is like snow

Life is like an avalanche

Life is like sledding down a hill

Those had been written during the snow storm in January, when school had been closed for two weeks. I sighed and put my diary back on the shelf under a pile of books.
Mom calls me to dinner and I head down the stairs.</description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div>Up…down…up…down. The bubbles in my lava lamp merge into one big bubble, then they part, jiggling.<br />
When I’d put lava lamp on my Christmas wish list, dad had asked me what color I wanted. I remembered all five colors of lava lamps at Light Spectrum, a store that’s been a few blocks away for as long as I can remember.<br />
“Teal, green, and pink.” I muttered to myself. I LOVE teal, teal has been my favorite color ever since I knew it existed.<br />
Apparantly it’s a bunch of other people’s favorite color too, because they were all out, so dad got a pink one.<br />
Tears well up in my eyes as I watch the two pink bubbles floating down again.<br />
“Watcha doing?” My little brother asks in that annoying way he has. <br />
“None of your business” I turn off the last gift from my father.<br />
My brother rubs the dust off of my newer sculptures like he does when he’s nervous. <br />
I blink the tears out of my eyes as I watch the now white bubbles floating down for the last time. At least, until I turn it back on again.<br />
“Life is like that.” I sigh.<br />
“What?” Eli asks. “Get your grubby hands off my sculptures!” I snap.<br />
Eli crosses his arms angrily.<br />
“Mommy says to be nice to me because daddy just died!” He says, as if this ends the conversation.<br />
“Sister says you should be nice to her because daddy just died too!” I lead him out of my room and slam the door.<br />
Then I take out my diary and write:<br />
<br />
Life is like the bubbles in a lava lamp.<br />
<br />
I look at the things before it. I’ve been writing Life Is Like poems ever since I read one in a book of poems mom bought me for my birthday. There are others:<br />
<br />
Life is like snow<br />
<br />
Life is like an avalanche<br />
<br />
Life is like sledding down a hill<br />
<br />
Those had been written during the snow storm in January, when school had been closed for two weeks. I sighed and put my diary back on the shelf under a pile of books.<br />
Mom calls me to dinner and I head down the stairs.</div>

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			<title>Hey Everyone(: Cierra here!</title>
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			<pubDate>Thu, 17 May 2012 14:13:11 GMT</pubDate>
			<description><![CDATA[^^Hi guys. I'm new because I wanted to write a story about how me and my boyfriend started going out. It took me FOREVER to find this site!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div>^^Hi guys. I'm new because I wanted to write a story about how me and my boyfriend started going out. It took me FOREVER to find this site!</div>

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			<title>Poetry Summer Camp</title>
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			<pubDate>Thu, 17 May 2012 05:09:07 GMT</pubDate>
			<description><![CDATA[Those of you who once frequented TW probably remember the poetry camps: a combination of personalized teaching, writing, critiquing, and poetry discussion. If the TW poetry camps were private tutoring, consider this a group study session &#8211; effectively a poetry workshop but with more flexibility, awesomeness, and room for real learning and growth. 

(I put this in literary discussion because it feels like the best fit for my goals. If some mod sees a better place for this, move away!)


*The goal*

To get people reading poetry, writing poetry, and discussing both. 
To channel summer freedom, boredom, or a thirst for adventure into fun and productive writing and discussion.


*The plan*

1. Go forth into the world and find a poetry book. It can be from any time period, in any style; it can be by a single author or it can be an anthology; but it must be something that you have only read small portions of or not read at all or not read for a long long time. Hunt through your (or your parents!) bookshelves, go to a library, a yard sale, whatever. While reading poetry on the internet is great, its not the same as reading a book: holding it in your hands, carrying it with you, writing it in if that&#8217;s how you roll. If you really can&#8217;t find a book, feel free to use YWO&#8217;s poetry library or whatever online poetry collection you like the best &#8230; but I think carrying and reading and flipping through a physical book is an important experience.

2. Post the title and author or editor of your book. If you run out of book or decide you hate it, you can change &#8211; this is a summer fling, not a marriage. If you change your book, post the new book. You can post a picture if you want! (But you don&#8217;t have to).

3. At least once a week (though as often as you feel like it), quote a passage from a poem &#8211; or a whole poem if its not too long &#8211; and riff off of it in some way. Some passages will strike you as you read: start there. If it gives you an idea, go with it. If it seems crazy, rant about why its crazy. If it inspires you to write a poem, meander on into that poem. Your response can be in the form of poetry, prose, or anything in between.

4. About every week, I&#8217;ll post some kind of prompt for poetry and discussion. This prompt will help you find interesting stuff to talk about and respond to in your book, as well as get the juices flowing for writing.

5. You should also post some kind of discussion, comment, or question about somebody else&#8217;s post every week or so. The idea is to take a break from your book and your poetry and take the time to learn from someone else (or to help someone else). Ask them questions, give advice, talk about what you find interesting, suggest improvements or changes.

6. If you have questions in the course of reading or writing, this is a great place to ask. How do I imitate a poet without sounding like I&#8217;m copying? What is the form of this poem that I read? How do rhyme like this poet rhymes? Is it possible to write an original poem about the moon?

7. Though I&#8217;d like the people to post about every week, people can come and go for camp, vacation, real life, whatever. Ideally we will have enough people that the discussion will continue even if the participants change. I will be trying to keep things bustling from now until mid-August. Come when you can, leave when you must!


*The rules*

Be willing to learn: not just from me, but from everyone in the group.

Be honest and respectful in your comments and critiques on other people&#8217;s writing. In some ways, I consider honesty a sign of respect &#8211; respect that the person can handle your opinion and your advice (don&#8217;t sugar coat); but also respect that fact that they are trying and care about poetry (don&#8217;t be rude). You&#8217;re all pretty cool here, though, so I don&#8217;t expect issues on this front.

If you write something for this workshop and want to post it on the main poetry forum for critique, you&#8217;re encouraged to do so! I don&#8217;t want to take away from the main action of the forum, and the kinds of critique and discussion you&#8217;ll get here will be different from the kinds you&#8217;ll get in the poetry or member&#8217;s only poetry forums. 

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I look forward to a summer of poetry with you all!
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div>Those of you who once frequented TW probably remember the poetry camps: a combination of personalized teaching, writing, critiquing, and poetry discussion. If the TW poetry camps were private tutoring, consider this a group study session &#8211; effectively a poetry workshop but with more flexibility, awesomeness, and room for real learning and growth. <br />
<br />
(I put this in literary discussion because it feels like the best fit for my goals. If some mod sees a better place for this, move away!)<br />
<br />
<br />
<b><font color="#33A1C9">The goal</font></b><br />
<br />
To get people reading poetry, writing poetry, and discussing both. <br />
To channel summer freedom, boredom, or a thirst for adventure into fun and productive writing and discussion.<br />
<br />
<br />
<b><font color="#33A1C9">The plan</font></b><br />
<br />
1. Go forth into the world and find a poetry book. It can be from any time period, in any style; it can be by a single author or it can be an anthology; but it must be something that you have only read small portions of or not read at all or not read for a long long time. Hunt through your (or your parents!) bookshelves, go to a library, a yard sale, whatever. While reading poetry on the internet is great, its not the same as reading a book: holding it in your hands, carrying it with you, writing it in if that&#8217;s how you roll. If you <i>really</i> can&#8217;t find a book, feel free to use YWO&#8217;s poetry library or whatever online poetry collection you like the best &#8230; but I think carrying and reading and flipping through a physical book is an important experience.<br />
<br />
2. Post the title and author or editor of your book. If you run out of book or decide you hate it, you can change &#8211; this is a summer fling, not a marriage. If you change your book, post the new book. You can post a picture if you want! (But you don&#8217;t have to).<br />
<br />
3. At least once a week (though as often as you feel like it), quote a passage from a poem &#8211; or a whole poem if its not too long &#8211; and riff off of it in some way. Some passages will strike you as you read: start there. If it gives you an idea, go with it. If it seems crazy, rant about why its crazy. If it inspires you to write a poem, meander on into that poem. Your response can be in the form of poetry, prose, or anything in between.<br />
<br />
4. About every week, I&#8217;ll post some kind of prompt for poetry and discussion. This prompt will help you find interesting stuff to talk about and respond to in your book, as well as get the juices flowing for writing.<br />
<br />
5. You should also post some kind of discussion, comment, or question about somebody else&#8217;s post every week or so. The idea is to take a break from your book and your poetry and take the time to learn from someone else (or to help someone else). Ask them questions, give advice, talk about what you find interesting, suggest improvements or changes.<br />
<br />
6. If you have questions in the course of reading or writing, this is a great place to ask. How do I imitate a poet without sounding like I&#8217;m copying? What is the form of this poem that I read? How do rhyme like this poet rhymes? Is it possible to write an original poem about the moon?<br />
<br />
7. Though I&#8217;d like the people to post about every week, people can come and go for camp, vacation, real life, whatever. Ideally we will have enough people that the discussion will continue even if the participants change. I will be trying to keep things bustling from now until mid-August. Come when you can, leave when you must!<br />
<br />
<br />
<b><font color="#33A1C9">The rules</font></b><br />
<br />
Be willing to learn: not just from me, but from everyone in the group.<br />
<br />
Be honest and respectful in your comments and critiques on other people&#8217;s writing. In some ways, I consider honesty a sign of respect &#8211; respect that the person can handle your opinion and your advice (don&#8217;t sugar coat); but also respect that fact that they are trying and care about poetry (don&#8217;t be rude). You&#8217;re all pretty cool here, though, so I don&#8217;t expect issues on this front.<br />
<br />
If you write something for this workshop and want to post it on the main poetry forum for critique, you&#8217;re encouraged to do so! I don&#8217;t want to take away from the main action of the forum, and the kinds of critique and discussion you&#8217;ll get here will be different from the kinds you&#8217;ll get in the poetry or member&#8217;s only poetry forums. <br />
<br />
----------<br />
<br />
Interested? Subscribe to this thread - updates will show up in your User CP when you go to admire the thank points that people have given you. The option to subscribe is available at the top of the thread under &quot;Thread Tools&quot;:<img src="http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i41/Mynnan/poetrycampsubscribe.jpg" border="0" alt="" /><br />
<br />
I look forward to a summer of poetry with you all!<br />
If you have questions or suggestions for how to make this workshop good, the VM box is always open.</div>

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			<title>Survival by Suicide: The Great Revival</title>
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			<pubDate>Wed, 16 May 2012 22:17:26 GMT</pubDate>
			<description><![CDATA[In honor of Lizzie's birthday, I have decided to revive the greatest game to ever come to YWO: Survival by Suicide. Our magazine's name is based on this game's title, by the way, even though I probably rigged the polls to make that happen. 

For those of you who have no idea what I'm talking about, Survival by Suicide is a simple game where you attempt to kill other players until you are the only one left standing. The narrator, after receiving everyone's actions, writes a gruesome story detailing every horrfic demise. Here (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=125) are (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=1151) some (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=6494&highlight=survival+suicide) links (https://sites.google.com/site/survivalbysuicide/) to threads of previous games (thanks to Fi for her work bringing SBS back last year).

Without any further ado, here are the rules:

_*Rules*_ 

1) Each round, every player picks one action and sends the narrator a private message with one of the following actions: shoot the air, shoot yourself, or shoot another player.
 
*Shoot the air*: This has no effect on you, anyone else, or anything, really.
 *Shoot yourself*: If you shoot yourself and no one else tries to shoot you, you die. If you shoot yourself AND at least one other player tries to shoot you too, you remain alive and all your assailants die instead.
 *Shoot someone: *You must specify which player you wish to shoot. When you shoot that player, they die. If your victim has shot him/herself that round, you die instead.
 
2) At the end of each round, the narrator writes a story detailing the gruesome deaths (or survivals) of each player. The survivors are put together in a new standoff  and the next round ensues. This continues until there is only one player  left, who is declared the winner.
2b) If all players die simultaneously in one round, that round is repeated.
2c) If no players die in one round, that round is repeated.

3) If you wish to, you can publicly declare/bluff/lie about your actions anywhere you wish. You can also make and break deals with other people. 
 
4) One round lasts 48 hours. With each update, there will be a new deadline for your submission.
4b) Players who don't submit an action by the deadline are treated as if they shot the air.
4c) If a player is inactive for two rounds in a row, s/he automatically dies.
 
5) The winner gets to be the narrator of the next game. If the winner does not want to be the narrator, then s/he can give the job to someone else, or ask me to pick the new narrator.
 
6) Don't take things too seriously! It's all just a game! (Theon Greyjoy, Game of Thrones)
 
7) The first post will be frequently updated for information on the  current game. If you have a question, it can probably be answered here. Post here or PM me if you have any questions.
 
8) The Overlady (that's me, Carraka,) reserves the right to alter/add  to the rules and resolve any disputes that arise when queer stuff  occurs.

_*Convoluted Rules*_
These are added when queer stuff occurs, and hopefully will never need to be put in use a second time.
1) If the narrator receives an action via PM but forgets to  write a player into the round, then that player survives the round. 
1b) If this rule is abused, we shall all be very angry. And sad. We  shall also nullify this rule. It only exists currently to keep games  consistent, but the Olympics rules are inconsistent, so this rule ought  to be nullified.
1c) Hmm ...
 
2) When considering SBS actions, PM messages are always valid  over communication anywhere else, be it in a thread, in the YWO  chatroom, or off-site. For this reason, if you are sending an action,  SEND IT IN A PM.
2b) If you want to give your action somewhere else, it's best to take a  screenshot, so you can prove it happened. This way, if the narrator does  not notice your action or forgets, you can prove it happened.
 
3) If the narrator is unable to narrate after having already written  narration for the game, the narrator can pass the narration  responsibilities to someone else.
3b) If the narrator does not want to choose, then the Overlady gets to choose.
3c) Although the new narrator is strongly encouraged to continue the  previous theme, the new narrator may change the theme if s/he  wishes.

That's it! If you'd like to register, sign up in this thread. If you think you won't have time, all you have to do is write a PM to someone containing one word, every two days. It's the narrator who has the hard work. 

If you have any questions, ask!

_SBS: The Great Revival_
The narrator of the 1st game is *Julian*.
The theme of the 1st game is *TBA*.
Registration for the 1st game closes *Thursday**, June 7th at 11PM EST*.

_Signed up_: 
Carraka
Majyk
Iridescence
thecollector
Wolfie
éan
The Enchanted Muggle
Lykaios
GeorgeMichael
Lizzie
Shaun]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div>In honor of Lizzie's birthday, I have decided to revive the greatest game to ever come to YWO: Survival by Suicide. Our magazine's name is based on this game's title, by the way, even though I probably rigged the polls to make that happen. <br />
<br />
For those of you who have no idea what I'm talking about, Survival by Suicide is a simple game where you attempt to kill other players until you are the only one left standing. The narrator, after receiving everyone's actions, writes a gruesome story detailing every horrfic demise. <a href="http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=125" target="_blank">Here</a> <a href="http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=1151" target="_blank">are</a> <a href="http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=6494&amp;highlight=survival+suicide" target="_blank">some</a> <a href="https://sites.google.com/site/survivalbysuicide/" target="_blank">links</a> to threads of previous games (thanks to Fi for her work bringing SBS back last year).<br />
<br />
Without any further ado, here are the rules:<br />
<br />
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<u><b>Rules</b></u> <br />
<br />
1) Each round, every player picks one action and sends the narrator a private message with one of the following actions: shoot the air, shoot yourself, or shoot another player.<br />
 <br />
<b>Shoot the air</b>: This has no effect on you, anyone else, or <i>anything</i>, really.<br />
 <b>Shoot yourself</b>: If you shoot yourself and no one else tries to shoot you, you die. If you shoot yourself AND at least one other player tries to shoot you too, you remain alive and all your assailants die instead.<br />
 <b>Shoot someone: </b>You must specify which player you wish to shoot. When you shoot that player, they die. If your victim has shot him/herself that round, you die instead.<br />
 <br />
2) At the end of each round, the narrator writes a story detailing the gruesome deaths (or survivals) of each player. The survivors are put together in a new standoff  and the next round ensues. This continues until there is only one player  left, who is declared the winner.<br />
2b) If all players die simultaneously in one round, that round is repeated.<br />
2c) If no players die in one round, that round is repeated.<br />
<br />
3) If you wish to, you can publicly declare/bluff/lie about your actions anywhere you wish. You can also make and break deals with other people. <br />
 <br />
4) One round lasts 48 hours. With each update, there will be a new deadline for your submission.<br />
4b) Players who don't submit an action by the deadline are treated as if they shot the air.<br />
4c) If a player is inactive for two rounds in a row, s/he automatically dies.<br />
 <br />
5) The winner gets to be the narrator of the next game. If the winner does not want to be the narrator, then s/he can give the job to someone else, or ask me to pick the new narrator.<br />
 <br />
6) Don't take things too seriously! It's all just a game! (Theon Greyjoy, <i>Game of Thrones</i>)<br />
 <br />
7) The first post will be frequently updated for information on the  current game. If you have a question, it can probably be answered here. Post here or PM me if you have any questions.<br />
 <br />
8) The Overlady (that's me, Carraka,) reserves the right to alter/add  to the rules and resolve any disputes that arise when queer stuff  occurs.<br />
<br />
<u><b>Convoluted Rules</b></u><br />
<font size="1">These are added when queer stuff occurs, and hopefully will never need to be put in use a second time.</font><br />
<div style="margin:20px; margin-top:5px">
<div class="smallfont" style="margin-bottom:2px"><b>Spoiler</b>: <input type="button" value="Show" style="width:45px;font-size:10px;margin:0px;padding:0px;" onclick="if (this.parentNode.parentNode.getElementsByTagName('div')[1].getElementsByTagName('div')[0].style.display != '') { this.parentNode.parentNode.getElementsByTagName('div')[1].getElementsByTagName('div')[0].style.display = '';		this.innerText = ''; this.value = 'Hide'; } else { this.parentNode.parentNode.getElementsByTagName('div')[1].getElementsByTagName('div')[0].style.display = 'none'; this.innerText = ''; this.value = 'Show'; }" />
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1) If the narrator receives an action via PM but forgets to  write a player into the round, then that player survives the round. <br />
1b) If this rule is abused, we shall all be very angry. And sad. We  shall also nullify this rule. It only exists currently to keep games  consistent, but the Olympics rules are inconsistent, so this rule ought  to be nullified.<br />
1c) Hmm ...<br />
 <br />
2) When considering SBS actions, PM messages are <i>always</i> valid  over communication anywhere else, be it in a thread, in the YWO  chatroom, or off-site. For this reason, if you are sending an action,  SEND IT IN A PM.<br />
2b) If you want to give your action somewhere else, it's best to take a  screenshot, so you can prove it happened. This way, if the narrator does  not notice your action or forgets, you can prove it happened.<br />
 <br />
3) If the narrator is unable to narrate after having already written  narration for the game, the narrator can pass the narration  responsibilities to someone else.<br />
3b) If the narrator does not want to choose, then the Overlady gets to choose.<br />
3c) Although the new narrator is strongly encouraged to continue the  previous theme, the new narrator may change the theme if s/he  wishes.</div></div></div></div></div></div><br />
<br />
That's it! If you'd like to register, sign up in this thread. If you think you won't have time, <i>all you have to do is write a PM to someone containing one word, every two days. </i>It's the narrator who has the hard work. <br />
<br />
If you have any questions, ask!<br />
<br />
<u>SBS: The Great Revival</u><br />
The narrator of the 1st game is <b>Julian</b>.<br />
The theme of the 1st game is <b>TBA</b>.<br />
Registration for the 1st game closes <b>Thursday</b><b>, June 7th at 11PM EST</b>.<br />
<br />
<u>Signed up</u>: <br />
Carraka<br />
Majyk<br />
Iridescence<br />
thecollector<br />
Wolfie<br />
éan<br />
The Enchanted Muggle<br />
Lykaios<br />
GeorgeMichael<br />
Lizzie<br />
Shaun</div>

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			<title>Edelweiss Pirates RP</title>
			<link>http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=8506&amp;goto=newpost</link>
			<pubDate>Wed, 16 May 2012 20:43:29 GMT</pubDate>
			<description><![CDATA[A historical RP set in Nazi Germany, this is a good role-play for people who dabble with writing peoms or lyrics. (But please don't make them the only thing here! I'd like a good story too! )
 
*PLEASE NOTE-This role play is set in Nazi-Germany, leading up to WW2. Please don't read this if you're going to find it upsetting. I think you'd need to be _at least_ 14 to read this.*


*Background Information:*
This role play is based in Nazi Germany in the time leading up to WW2. It's also based on the true story of what happened, but only loosely because I can't remember all the precise historical facts. (If you'd like it to be more historically accurate, PM me with what you'd like it to be changed to and I'll try and help!) All children over the age of 9 are practically required to join the Hitler Youth. It's a bit like the Brownies/Scouts - but much more army-orientated. They have 'excursions' to the country - spending three days in a military-style camp with long hikes and weapons training for the older ones. They are also not allowed to wear their own clothes - they have to wear uniforms - and are only allowed to listen to classical German music. There were some children who didn't want to join and rebelled. Instead of going to the HY meetings, they met up in old barns, street corners, anywhere they could find. They deliberately wore their own clothes, some girls even wore clothes from America (which meant trousers!). They listened to forbidden jazz music and often danced things like the lindy-hop. Some gangs went looking for HY members and beat them up, but most rebelled by writing their own songs and what I've just described. These groups, although separate groups, often used the same symbol - the edelweiss flower. This gained them the name 'Edelweiss Pirates'. A few years into the movement (where I intend to start this role-play), police officers began to arrest EP members if they found them. Death penalties were occasionally carried out.
*Characters:
*Your character can be from either the HY or the EP. Children did sometimes switch from one to the other, so you can change sides later on if you like. Younger brothers and sisters did join the EP as well, so your character can be under 9, but you will need a close family link with another character. I'm going to set a limit on the age - 21 - because I don't think adults would really do things like that. Here's a guide for a Character Profile.
*Name:*I'm not really bothered whether you have a German-sounding name or not, call yourself what you like! (Within reason, obviously.)
*Age: *As I said, you can be under 9, but not over 21.
*Side: *Are you with the HY or the EP?
*Gender: *
*Physical Description: 
Character: 
Other:* This is where you can say if there is anything special about your character. Can they play an instrument (guitars are much appreciated!), dance, write lyrics or anything else that comes to mind.


My Character:

*Name: *Anne-Marie Klein, but everyone calls her Annem.
*Age: *13 going on 14
*Side: *Edelweiss Pirates.
*Gender: *Female
*Physical Description: *Average height and build. Dark brown hair that she wears in a single plait down her back. She isn't very striking in appearance, but the few American clothes that she has really suit her.
*Character: *Can seem a little sullen at first, but once you get to know her she is passionate about the things that she loves and is very protective of her friends. She doesn't have many, but really values the ones that she has.
*Other: *Plays the guitar and sings, although she isn't very good at writing songs herself. Adores jazz and likes to watch others dance, althoug claims to have two left feet herself. Objects to violence, but on occasion will use mild violence herself in order to protect herself & those around her. Was in the Hitler Youth for six months when she was 9, but hasn't been to a meeting since because she hated every minute of it.

Annem also has a brother - he's up for grabs if anybody wants him!
*Name: *Hanz Klein
*Age: *7
*Side: *Edelweiss Pirates.
*Gender: *Male
*Physical Description: *Short in height, but is beginning to grow. Has dark brown hair like his sister, but (obviously!) wears it short. He wears plain shorts and top, usually with bits of mud or food stuck on, depending on whether he's been outside or in.
*Character: *Very trusting of people. Most favourite thing in the world is his sister, after that he likes to play outside.
*Other: *Likes to sing with his sister, although he isn't very good. He enjoys being part of the EP because everyone treats his kindly and someone normally plays with him whenever they meet up. He doesn't want to join the HY when he turns 9, but is scared that he will be made to.
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div>A historical RP set in Nazi Germany, this is a good role-play for people who dabble with writing peoms or lyrics. (But please don't make them the only thing here! I'd like a good story too! )<br />
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<b><font size="2">PLEASE NOTE-This role play is set in Nazi-Germany, leading up to WW2. Please don't read this if you're going to find it upsetting. I think you'd need to be <i><u>at least</u></i> 14 to read this.</font></b><br />
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<b>Background Information:</b><br />
This role play is based in Nazi Germany in the time leading up to WW2. It's also based on the true story of what happened, but only loosely because I can't remember all the precise historical facts. (If you'd like it to be more historically accurate, PM me with what you'd like it to be changed to and I'll try and help!) All children over the age of 9 are practically required to join the Hitler Youth. It's a bit like the Brownies/Scouts - but much more army-orientated. They have 'excursions' to the country - spending three days in a military-style camp with long hikes and weapons training for the older ones. They are also not allowed to wear their own clothes - they have to wear uniforms - and are only allowed to listen to classical German music. There were some children who didn't want to join and rebelled. Instead of going to the HY meetings, they met up in old barns, street corners, anywhere they could find. They deliberately wore their own clothes, some girls even wore clothes from America (which meant trousers!). They listened to forbidden jazz music and often danced things like the lindy-hop. Some gangs went looking for HY members and beat them up, but most rebelled by writing their own songs and what I've just described. These groups, although separate groups, often used the same symbol - the edelweiss flower. This gained them the name 'Edelweiss Pirates'. A few years into the movement (where I intend to start this role-play), police officers began to arrest EP members if they found them. Death penalties were occasionally carried out.<br />
<b>Characters:<br />
</b>Your character can be from either the HY or the EP. Children did sometimes switch from one to the other, so you can change sides later on if you like. Younger brothers and sisters did join the EP as well, so your character can be under 9, but you will need a close family link with another character. I'm going to set a limit on the age - 21 - because I don't think adults would really do things like that. Here's a guide for a Character Profile.<br />
<b>Name:</b><i>I'm not really bothered whether you have a German-sounding name or not, call yourself what you like! (Within reason, obviously.)<br />
</i><b>Age: </b><i>As I said, you can be under 9, but not over 21.</i><br />
<b>Side: </b><i>Are you with the HY or the EP?<br />
</i><b>Gender: </b><br />
<b>Physical Description: <br />
Character: <br />
Other:</b><i> This is where you can say if there is anything special about your character. Can they play an instrument (guitars are much appreciated!), dance, write lyrics or anything else that comes to mind.<br />
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My Character:<br />
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<b>Name: </b>Anne-Marie Klein, but everyone calls her Annem.<br />
<b>Age: </b>13 going on 14<br />
<b>Side: </b>Edelweiss Pirates.<br />
<b>Gender: </b>Female<br />
<b>Physical Description: </b>Average height and build. Dark brown hair that she wears in a single plait down her back. She isn't very striking in appearance, but the few American clothes that she has really suit her.<br />
<b>Character: </b>Can seem a little sullen at first, but once you get to know her she is passionate about the things that she loves and is very protective of her friends. She doesn't have many, but really values the ones that she has.<br />
<b>Other: </b>Plays the guitar and sings, although she isn't very good at writing songs herself. Adores jazz and likes to watch others dance, althoug claims to have two left feet herself. Objects to violence, but on occasion will use mild violence herself in order to protect herself &amp; those around her. Was in the Hitler Youth for six months when she was 9, but hasn't been to a meeting since because she hated every minute of it.<br />
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Annem also has a brother - he's up for grabs if anybody wants him!<br />
<b>Name: </b>Hanz Klein<br />
<b>Age: </b>7<br />
<b>Side: </b>Edelweiss Pirates.<br />
<b>Gender: </b>Male<br />
<b>Physical Description: </b>Short in height, but is beginning to grow. Has dark brown hair like his sister, but (obviously!) wears it short. He wears plain shorts and top, usually with bits of mud or food stuck on, depending on whether he's been outside or in.<br />
<b>Character: </b>Very trusting of people. Most favourite thing in the world is his sister, after that he likes to play outside.<br />
<b>Other: </b>Likes to sing with his sister, although he isn't very good. He enjoys being part of the EP because everyone treats his kindly and someone normally plays with him whenever they meet up. He doesn't want to join the HY when he turns 9, but is scared that he will be made to.<br />
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			<title>The Heart of Life</title>
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			<pubDate>Wed, 16 May 2012 19:43:46 GMT</pubDate>
			<description><![CDATA[~Chapter 1~

I fell in love at 16. With a boy named Austin. Austin and I had just turned 16 and that was also our 2 year anniversary. We loved each other and spent every day with each other. Our high school life was a pretty typical one. We both were considered &#8220;popular&#8221;, but we knew how to choose the right kind of friends. But then, it was that one day; that one night; that changed my life forever.

&#8220;Austin c&#8217;mon now, put me down now!!&#8221; I giggled. Austin had me scooped in his arms whirling me around in circles. We had just gotten out of the coffee shop. It was our anniversary which happened to be a few days after my birthday and my birthday was a week after Austin&#8217;s birthday. We have been best friends ever since we were 3. But we never ever thought we would fall in love with each other.

&#8220;As you wish your highness,&#8221; He said as he over dramatically bowed. I laughed and ran up and gave him a hug. We&#8217;ve been doing this for about 2 years now. And it never gets close to being old. Sure we&#8217;ve had our fights from time to time, but who doesn&#8217;t? I loved him until death did us part.

We had about 2 years of high school left because we were both sophomores. Then it was off to college. We were ready to go to Stanford together as well. Austin and I were pretty sure we&#8217;d both be able to get scholarships since he excelled in football, hockey, and lacrosse. I was a competitive swimmer and I excelled in track. We took 3 honors classes and were all set for a future at an amazing college.

&#8220;Hey!? Earth to Taylor? You okay babe?&#8221; he asked looking me in the eye.

&#8220;Yeah hun. Great!&#8221; I said with a huge smile. We had our bag of muffins in our hand and we jumped into his car. It was a Thursday evening so we got home around 9:30. Austin pulled into my driveway and as I was about to get out he grabbed my arm and pulled me into a sweet kiss. He had always smelled of vanilla in my opinion.

We sat in the car just looking into each other&#8217;s eyes for a while. His eyes are the most perfect thing I&#8217;ve ever seen in this world. One look can send you into a trance for hours. They&#8217;re blue.  A perfect, full colored blue; not too dull, nor too bright. They&#8217;re perfect.

I leaned forward until my lips were near his ears. &#8220;Guess what? I love your eyes.&#8221; I then pulled back and he had a grin on his face. He then also leaned forward and whispered in my ear, &#8220;Guess what? I love you.&#8221; I blushed at that and gave him a huge hug and kiss on the cheek. &#8220;I love you too.&#8221;

Then the lights on my front door turned on and my father opened it. He then yelled, &#8220;Hey Austin! Do you want to come inside for a bit?&#8221;

Austin got out and opened my door for me while yelling back, &#8220;Sorry sir! I have a strict curfew tonight. I&#8217;ve got 3 tests I need to study for as well.&#8221; My father nodded his head in approval.

As I left to leave, Austin leaned me against his car door, kissed me on the lips and said, &#8220;Good night love. I love you. You are my world.&#8221;

I was flattered by his comment and immediately hugged him and said, &#8220;Austin, I love you too! You are MY world.&#8221; Then we hugged and I went inside. Luckily, my dad hadn&#8217;t been watching us.

&#8220;You gotta love that young fella,&#8221; my dad said to me.

&#8220;Yeah, I do.&#8221; I told him looking him straight in the eye. My dad gave me a smile that I&#8217;ve never seen him give me before&#8230; and if I have, I can probably count on one hand how many times he has. My parents loved Austin because he was &#8220;Mr. Perfect&#8221; in their eyes. Always responsible, got good grades, was good at sports, etc&#8230;

That night was the best night of my life, I thought as I was going upstairs. That coffee shop was where we had our first date, and we went there for our 1 year and 2 year anniversary. Of course we also went there on casual dates as well. It was like &#8220;our place.&#8221;

But this was all 2 years ago. Not anymore. No. Now everything was different without Austin. I was alone and without my best friend and just a bunch of people always surrounding me. I&#8217;m always with so many people&#8230; but I always feel so empty without him; all because of that one stupid person.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div>~Chapter 1~<br />
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<i>I fell in love at 16. With a boy named Austin. Austin and I had just turned 16 and that was also our 2 year anniversary. We loved each other and spent every day with each other. Our high school life was a pretty typical one. We both were considered &#8220;popular&#8221;, but we knew how to choose the right kind of friends. But then, it was that one day; that one night; that changed my life forever.</i><br />
<br />
&#8220;Austin c&#8217;mon now, put me down now!!&#8221; I giggled. Austin had me scooped in his arms whirling me around in circles. We had just gotten out of the coffee shop. It was our anniversary which happened to be a few days after my birthday and my birthday was a week after Austin&#8217;s birthday. We have been best friends ever since we were 3. But we never ever thought we would fall in love with each other.<br />
<br />
&#8220;As you wish your highness,&#8221; He said as he over dramatically bowed. I laughed and ran up and gave him a hug. We&#8217;ve been doing this for about 2 years now. And it never gets close to being old. Sure we&#8217;ve had our fights from time to time, but who doesn&#8217;t? I loved him until death did us part.<br />
<br />
We had about 2 years of high school left because we were both sophomores. Then it was off to college. We were ready to go to Stanford together as well. Austin and I were pretty sure we&#8217;d both be able to get scholarships since he excelled in football, hockey, and lacrosse. I was a competitive swimmer and I excelled in track. We took 3 honors classes and were all set for a future at an amazing college.<br />
<br />
&#8220;Hey!? Earth to Taylor? You okay babe?&#8221; he asked looking me in the eye.<br />
<br />
&#8220;Yeah hun. Great!&#8221; I said with a huge smile. We had our bag of muffins in our hand and we jumped into his car. It was a Thursday evening so we got home around 9:30. Austin pulled into my driveway and as I was about to get out he grabbed my arm and pulled me into a sweet kiss. He had always smelled of vanilla in my opinion.<br />
<br />
We sat in the car just looking into each other&#8217;s eyes for a while. His eyes are the most perfect thing I&#8217;ve ever seen in this world. One look can send you into a trance for hours. They&#8217;re blue.  A perfect, full colored blue; not too dull, nor too bright. They&#8217;re perfect.<br />
<br />
I leaned forward until my lips were near his ears. &#8220;Guess what? I love your eyes.&#8221; I then pulled back and he had a grin on his face. He then also leaned forward and whispered in my ear, &#8220;Guess what? I love you.&#8221; I blushed at that and gave him a huge hug and kiss on the cheek. &#8220;I love you too.&#8221;<br />
<br />
Then the lights on my front door turned on and my father opened it. He then yelled, &#8220;Hey Austin! Do you want to come inside for a bit?&#8221;<br />
<br />
Austin got out and opened my door for me while yelling back, &#8220;Sorry sir! I have a strict curfew tonight. I&#8217;ve got 3 tests I need to study for as well.&#8221; My father nodded his head in approval.<br />
<br />
As I left to leave, Austin leaned me against his car door, kissed me on the lips and said, &#8220;Good night love. I love you. You are my world.&#8221;<br />
<br />
I was flattered by his comment and immediately hugged him and said, &#8220;Austin, I love you too! You are MY world.&#8221; Then we hugged and I went inside. Luckily, my dad hadn&#8217;t been watching us.<br />
<br />
&#8220;You gotta love that young fella,&#8221; my dad said to me.<br />
<br />
&#8220;Yeah, I do.&#8221; I told him looking him straight in the eye. My dad gave me a smile that I&#8217;ve never seen him give me before&#8230; and if I have, I can probably count on one hand how many times he has. My parents loved Austin because he was &#8220;Mr. Perfect&#8221; in their eyes. Always responsible, got good grades, was good at sports, etc&#8230;<br />
<br />
That night was the best night of my life, I thought as I was going upstairs. That coffee shop was where we had our first date, and we went there for our 1 year and 2 year anniversary. Of course we also went there on casual dates as well. It was like &#8220;our place.&#8221;<br />
<br />
But this was all 2 years ago. Not anymore. No. Now everything was different without Austin. I was alone and without my best friend and just a bunch of people always surrounding me. I&#8217;m always with so many people&#8230; but I always feel so empty without him; all because of that one stupid person.</div>

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			<title>I just felt like writting a story</title>
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			<pubDate>Wed, 16 May 2012 19:23:30 GMT</pubDate>
			<description><![CDATA[I was just thinking about this and my keyboard started writing:

Today I woke up after the bell kept ringing, and I couldn't help but to wake up after the door kept singing those awful notes, and it kept playing its drums "knock, knock." I was so upset by how much the door wanted my attention, I think it was jealous of my great relationship with my pillow. I know I don't like that damn door, that  doesn't give it much of an excuse about bothering my emotional grasp- breath-taking moment with my pillow.

I kicked myself of the bed after a wild night. The night included wild babes with a lot of playing around, and something about a dog, I couldn't point it out, I know I'm heavenly drunk today, since the bed is spinning and I'm technically blind, and because green *something* was filling the floor. the door kept singing, I shouted "I'm coming," and headed  to the door, little that I know as I opened the door  a giant man 7 feet tall, perfectly fit, with a mustache to go with his dashy looks came to me and said" hello my old friend, how are you today?" I gasped for a moment! Maybe because of his tall or maybe because he said the word (old friend). I kept looking at him in a surprise way. Old friend what do you mean ? He looked at me, and said "Ah I see you don't remember me" I rose my head up to see his face again and shake it in approval, he looked at me and replied I'm your .........
The   Story ends here *disappointing isn't it?* to bad it had a glass of romance.
share your ideas ?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div>I was just thinking about this and my keyboard started writing:<br />
<br />
Today I woke up after the bell kept ringing, and I couldn't help but to wake up after the door kept singing those awful notes, and it kept playing its drums &quot;knock, knock.&quot; I was so upset by how much the door wanted my attention, I think it was jealous of my great relationship with my pillow. I know I don't like that damn door, that  doesn't give it much of an excuse about bothering my emotional grasp- breath-taking moment with my pillow.<br />
<br />
I kicked myself of the bed after a wild night. The night included wild babes with a lot of playing around, and something about a dog, I couldn't point it out, I know I'm heavenly drunk today, since the bed is spinning and I'm technically blind, and because green *something* was filling the floor. the door kept singing, I shouted &quot;I'm coming,&quot; and headed  to the door, little that I know as I opened the door  a giant man 7 feet tall, perfectly fit, with a mustache to go with his dashy looks came to me and said&quot; hello my old friend, how are you today?&quot; I gasped for a moment! Maybe because of his tall or maybe because he said the word (old friend). I kept looking at him in a surprise way. Old friend what do you mean ? He looked at me, and said &quot;Ah I see you don't remember me&quot; I rose my head up to see his face again and shake it in approval, he looked at me and replied I'm your .........<br />
The   Story ends here *disappointing isn't it?* to bad it had a glass of romance.<br />
share your ideas ?</div>

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			<title>Misfortune</title>
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			<pubDate>Wed, 16 May 2012 16:18:03 GMT</pubDate>
			<description>Image: http://i884.photobucket.com/albums/ac42/DanasANIMElove/215710_1579217615129_1676329794_1045598_750837_n.jpg 

Scanned this up real quick.</description>
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Scanned this up real quick.</div>

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			<title>Missy Of Moon</title>
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			<pubDate>Wed, 16 May 2012 15:16:27 GMT</pubDate>
			<description><![CDATA[Hey buddies :) 
I don't know if this idea is common or whatsoever (actually, one of my friend said so ).
The idea came from an animated movie called "Despicable Me" - in that movie someone steals the moon using a shrink machine . This is a story of girl , who is Moon's daughter . it have nothing to do with that movie except the fact of erasing the Moon.
hope you enjoy it :)  


Chapter-1

Those thirsty raindrops trolled on my back. Chirping, i turned around. There was a thunderous scream - I screamed. Where i was? It was a dead end of some deadly vale. Horrified, i slumped backwards and hit the ground hard. Something went straight into me. "aah" I squalled heavily and clutched the grass beneath . I could feel something had started flowing inside my body .There was such a deathly pain beneath my leg....beneath my right leg. I could see nothing, it was dark all around, I couldn't turn, couldn’t move. i was incapacitated . 

The night grew darker and darker. i tried to roll my body down the other side. But, as i slid there was a hollowing burning pain in my leg. It felt as if some force had grabbed me there - i was stuck . i was screaming, yelling, crying or whatever i could do to get myself out of there.- but i couldn't . soon enough, my voice started cracking too. My weak shrills were only audible few seconds later and after that my throat completely went off.

Looking as its haze, breathing from the night sky - which a moment ago twinkled in my glum eyes, now looked more like my grave's cover. Completely foiled, My eyes went for The Moon - the only light left in my life. But, that too not for long . When i got its notice, it wasn't in its usual delight. it was twitching in pain. it appeared as if some devastating forces were about o steal it , as if it was reducing its size....No! Wait....it was made to reduce its size...No! it was being sucked up, swallowed up- just like me . The night in heaven tried to have its feast and so in earth, was happening with me . There was some bluish beams and bam!- it was gone. The night ate the moon. 

I couldn't trust my senses lest i was insane! it was not possible . Whatsoever, i had to trust them - it happened in front of my own eyes . The truth i reckon was about to end. it was indeed end of everything . The Sun, The Stars, The days, The nights, The Earth, The Moon, ....and Me. The earth was dead. I applied some science at least to believe in what all my mind blabbered ! - "loss of Moon is Increase in gravitation, bullshit. We all gonna die being stuck up at places and water drinking us", there had to be then no limits to my pessimism . "Our Earth is dead" i grieved a sigh and lay dormant . 

Bearing those pernicious trickles of rain, I loathed myself . "How could you? You Ediot ! ...you should have stayed up at the hotel with your family and enjoyed the rain rather than coming here and enjoying your death, alone" ,I cursed my every single cell .Tears emerged from my heart, my brown eyes cradling them- burned to death. Everything blurred cause the tears were just filling, not falling. Everything was strange. Everything reminded of only one thing - DEATH. their were my screeching silent yells . That pain was unbearable, irresistible. Thunder thudded the atmosphere with ever increasing dissonances. Suddenly, there was a screaking spark and desperate downpour - all in a crack of five beautiful seconds . 

i was somewhere- somewhere in some Hotel ...Gah! it was my hotel's corridor - on my doormat, outside the my room 202, oblivious. busy with considering me a poop. and above all, i wasn't wet at all . "where had gone the thunder, where were my screams , that valley ?..Was it a dream?" i said to my ears as I tried balancing my feet on ground. "ouch!" I screamed, there was still pain beneath my right leg. " I can't be" I mumbled to myself , confused till now. Everything seemed to be in place, except me. People were moving, dancing, having fun all around, in that corridor .Even the moon, it was there. That was the most alluring sight. i heaved a sigh of relief. These were enough signs showing me that its all fine . I must talk about it with Dave and Mom - i considered. 
"Dave ...Mom" I called, she said they were in 201. I rushed, I was never so excited about telling parents anything than today ! I ran to hit open the door, but it was already open. the door sided backward and I fell hard inside. "uhh.." I grunted. “Doing fishy stuff they must lock their door" i coughed a bit to grasp some attention from those lovers. as soon as they took my notice, popped out of the bed. It was damn embarrassing! I chuckled and chortled while turning around and shut their door tight. Anyways, this Dave and Mom thing drifted me away from that daydreamed nightmare - at least for some time. i went back to 201
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div>Hey buddies :) <br />
I don't know if this idea is common or whatsoever (actually, one of my friend said so ).<br />
The idea came from an animated movie called &quot;Despicable Me&quot; - in that movie someone steals the moon using a shrink machine . This is a story of girl , who is Moon's daughter . it have nothing to do with that movie except the fact of erasing the Moon.<br />
hope you enjoy it :)  <br />
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Chapter-1<br />
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Those thirsty raindrops trolled on my back. Chirping, i turned around. There was a thunderous scream - I screamed. Where i was? It was a dead end of some deadly vale. Horrified, i slumped backwards and hit the ground hard. Something went straight into me. &quot;aah&quot; I squalled heavily and clutched the grass beneath . I could feel something had started flowing inside my body .There was such a deathly pain beneath my leg....beneath my right leg. I could see nothing, it was dark all around, I couldn't turn, couldn’t move. i was incapacitated . <br />
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The night grew darker and darker. i tried to roll my body down the other side. But, as i slid there was a hollowing burning pain in my leg. It felt as if some force had grabbed me there - i was stuck . i was screaming, yelling, crying or whatever i could do to get myself out of there.- but i couldn't . soon enough, my voice started cracking too. My weak shrills were only audible few seconds later and after that my throat completely went off.<br />
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Looking as its haze, breathing from the night sky - which a moment ago twinkled in my glum eyes, now looked more like my grave's cover. Completely foiled, My eyes went for The Moon - the only light left in my life. But, that too not for long . When i got its notice, it wasn't in its usual delight. it was twitching in pain. it appeared as if some devastating forces were about o steal it , as if it was reducing its size....No! Wait....it was made to reduce its size...No! it was being sucked up, swallowed up- just like me . The night in heaven tried to have its feast and so in earth, was happening with me . There was some bluish beams and bam!- it was gone. The night ate the moon. <br />
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I couldn't trust my senses lest i was insane! it was not possible . Whatsoever, i had to trust them - it happened in front of my own eyes . The truth i reckon was about to end. it was indeed end of everything . The Sun, The Stars, The days, The nights, The Earth, The Moon, ....and Me. The earth was dead. I applied some science at least to believe in what all my mind blabbered ! - &quot;loss of Moon is Increase in gravitation, bullshit. We all gonna die being stuck up at places and water drinking us&quot;, there had to be then no limits to my pessimism . &quot;Our Earth is dead&quot; i grieved a sigh and lay dormant . <br />
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Bearing those pernicious trickles of rain, I loathed myself . &quot;How could you? You Ediot ! ...you should have stayed up at the hotel with your family and enjoyed the rain rather than coming here and enjoying your death, alone&quot; ,I cursed my every single cell .Tears emerged from my heart, my brown eyes cradling them- burned to death. Everything blurred cause the tears were just filling, not falling. Everything was strange. Everything reminded of only one thing - DEATH. their were my screeching silent yells . That pain was unbearable, irresistible. Thunder thudded the atmosphere with ever increasing dissonances. Suddenly, there was a screaking spark and desperate downpour - all in a crack of five beautiful seconds . <br />
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i was somewhere- somewhere in some Hotel ...Gah! it was my hotel's corridor - on my doormat, outside the my room 202, oblivious. busy with considering me a poop. and above all, i wasn't wet at all . &quot;where had gone the thunder, where were my screams , that valley ?..Was it a dream?&quot; i said to my ears as I tried balancing my feet on ground. &quot;ouch!&quot; I screamed, there was still pain beneath my right leg. &quot; I can't be&quot; I mumbled to myself , confused till now. Everything seemed to be in place, except me. People were moving, dancing, having fun all around, in that corridor .Even the moon, it was there. That was the most alluring sight. i heaved a sigh of relief. These were enough signs showing me that its all fine . I must talk about it with Dave and Mom - i considered. <br />
&quot;Dave ...Mom&quot; I called, she said they were in 201. I rushed, I was never so excited about telling parents anything than today ! I ran to hit open the door, but it was already open. the door sided backward and I fell hard inside. &quot;uhh..&quot; I grunted. “Doing fishy stuff they must lock their door&quot; i coughed a bit to grasp some attention from those lovers. as soon as they took my notice, popped out of the bed. It was damn embarrassing! I chuckled and chortled while turning around and shut their door tight. Anyways, this Dave and Mom thing drifted me away from that daydreamed nightmare - at least for some time. i went back to 201<br />
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			<description><![CDATA[I need a spanish translator, does anyone know where I can find a free one online to use? I would like if it was accurate. I am writting my story and the character is in high school, so it's a spanish class but I never took it when I was in H.S. So if anyone knows spanish who would be willing to help or if anyone knows where I can find a free translator online that would be great. Thanks in advance!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div>I need a spanish translator, does anyone know where I can find a free one online to use? I would like if it was accurate. I am writting my story and the character is in high school, so it's a spanish class but I never took it when I was in H.S. So if anyone knows spanish who would be willing to help or if anyone knows where I can find a free translator online that would be great. Thanks in advance!</div>

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			<title>Hiya!</title>
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			<description><![CDATA[Hi, I'm Hannah (Banana!) 
I'm new here and just wanted to say a big 'hello' to everyone! :angel: 
Well... I guess that's all, if you want to know more about me, feel free to message me, I won't bite!
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I'm new here and just wanted to say a big 'hello' to everyone! :angel: <br />
Well... I guess that's all, if you want to know more about me, feel free to message me, I won't bite!<br />
~Hannah</font></div>

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