Critique The Person Above You!

[Andy]

Okay, this is a thread where each person does a critique linked within the previous post, and then posts a link to their own thing they want critiqued. The idea is that every time you critique something in this thread, you are guaranteed to get a critique in return.

[GeorgeMichael]

Here's my Critique...
*Nice link not possible for me still so...*
http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?p=3379#post3379

There it is!. It's Shadow's The Lost Prince.


Next Person, please critique Chapter 3 of...

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?p=2405#post2405


Is that how it's supposed to work?

[Nyx]

Well I edited chap.3 a long time ago so I'm not gonna bother posting the link;)

So could the next person please crit this "practice poem" (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?p=6612#post6612)

[Eve]

Critiqued.

Please critique this. Shorty Story (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?p=7288#post7288).

[Nyx]

Critiqued:D

Please crit. Mlle. Formage -short story- (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?p=8145#post8145)

[GeorgeMichael]

Ok, I crit it Nyx :)

Next person please crit this story :)

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?p=8804#post8804

I would put it in a fancy link but the bell just rang and I have to leave so ...:)

[Nyx]

Critiqued:)

Once again, please crit. Mlle. Formage -short story- (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?p=8145#post8145)

If you've already crit.ed this then you can just skip this post.:)

[Eve]

Critique.

Please critique RumplyStickyCheese (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?p=11146#post11146)

[jordanisonfire]

Eve has left now, but that doesn't matter, I'll still crit it. :link:

Please to crit The Adventures of Roderic, The Satirical Hero (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=678). :roman:

[Ichigo]

I didn't really crit but I did the best I could.
Some haikus I found. (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?p=24452#post24452)

[Guessed]

Spambot alert! Spray it with a hose! Of fire!
Edit: Thank you.

[Simmi]

I want to continue this, since it's a really good idea. And since Guessed didn't post anything... or that person did and just edited it I'll just post a link and go crit someone's work...

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=2686 Just Like Koi {Chapter One}


EDIT: I critqued Gabby's story. If anyone was wonderin'.

[Bowie20049]

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=2963

done critting yours.

[jcsk88]

This thread ought to be revived. I critiqued yours, bowie.

Chronomancer Chapter Three

[miss_smiley]

I can't believe this thread was allowed to die! Nooo! Also, I can't believe I never noticed it before...

[Rouge]

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=3749
I critiqued yours, Smiles. (:

[miss_smiley]

Oh, I bags this one. No one touch it. It's MINE! MINE, I TELL YOU!
...I just can't do it now, is all. Work starts up in 3...2...1...

[Zombified]

I just critiqued, Smiles over there.

A once over on my latest story, "Sally" (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=3730), would be greatly appreciated.

[miss_smiley]

Done, Mr Frankenstein. *tips hat and hitches up imaginary belt*

Anyone who's interested, a quick look at Craving (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=3781) in the lyrics section would be marvellous. (Be warned, though. It's a sacred piece).

EDIT: Or someone else could just take my turn. I'm pretty fortunate with my critiques - I always seem to get more than some people... (also, Grey Day has plenty of critiques at the moment and Death's Mistress is a novel, which you kind of have to read from the beginning, and it's something like thirteen chapters long now...)

[Zombified]

I'll take a look at Craving for ya.

One more critique on Sally (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=3730)would be nice. When you're a horror/western writer, people tend to overlook your work.

Also, I'd like to post this offer here.
I will be on a critiquing binge this week.
By Sunday I want to have read and critiqued 7 different things. I have two done so far, so that's five more chances for you people!
PM or VM me what you want read and I will get to it by Sunday!

[jcsk88]

This is the essential reason we all joined this site. Crit ticket on Sally. I'll do it ASAP.

[An Angry Panda]

I haven't gotten many crits. Only about 5 or 6. My newest post hasn't been critiqued, and I'm posting some more tomorrow. I wish people could just critique something without being asked. My critiques have come from directly asking the person.

Enough of my ranting. Go to Dystress in the Novels (Members Only) section.

And crit ticket on Sally. I'll get to it tomorrow.

[xcomplex]

critiqued!!

Critique My very first short story, Critique? its under short story members only! :P

[jcsk88]

Done, xcomplex. I like the recent activity on this thread. Let's keep it going. Requesting crits on either of the two MOST RECENT posts show in my sig. Thanks in advance!

[Rouge]

FRANKIE (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=3840)

Got your's jcsk. Now someone do mine. :[ Also, the most recent update to the story is at the bottom of the thread. Crit that, not the first post.
EDIT: it's actually in the middle. :p my bad

[jcsk88]

Just when I thought this thread had gained some momentum...

Finished with yours, Adri. Same as before, either of my latest posts will do. You can find them in my sig. Thanks in advance!

[jcsk88]

I find it unfortunate that this thread has faded into oblivion once again. I mean, it must've been stickied for a reason! So... in the footsteps of Zombified, I am going on a critiquing binge!

I'll do my best to complete one crit a day over the next week, so feel free to drop me a PM or VM if you want something looked at. I'll probably critique at random if I don't get any requests, but I'd prefer to comment on something that someone wants an opinion on.

Note: I only ctitique fantasy/sci-fi shorts/novels. I don't read/write poems or lyrics, so I'm no use there.

[Majyk]

In an effort to keep this going...

I finished your crit on chapter nine, Jcsk.

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=3883 Either chapter one or two works.

[Jack]

Done and dusted. Oh, and good job Mayjk, let me know when you post the next chapter.

Golden Gate: Conclave. (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?p=96482#post96482)Give it a whirl.

[Im-All-For-Believing]

Done and dusted. Oh, and good job Mayjk, let me know when you post the next chapter.

Golden Gate: Conclave. (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?p=96482#post96482)Give it a whirl.

Critiqued! :D Character Development please? The link's in my sig! :)