Taking crit requests

[Wig]

Just throw them at me. I'll do anything you ask me to except for lyrics. I can't critique lyrics.

[lalodragon]

I'm going to post something so you can crit it. Really I am. I've been meaning to post anyway.

EDIT: http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?p=153032#post153032

[Crazyangel]

Do you crit short stories? I could do with a few critting. *sigh* Recently I've had way too much spare time. So my mind has overflown with words, hehe. Anyway back to the point, should I PM you my short? Or something else?

[Wig]

Yeah, I do short stories. I do anything but lyrics (like I stated). You can send them to me however, PM/email would be fine. I am going to recommend that you post them on the site, that way you'll get more opinions than just me, but it's your choice.

Please note that Foyle is coming up so I am critiquing some people's poems for them at the moment and I am trying to write myself. Your story(ies) may then take a back seat until that is over.

[BookSquirt]

If you are still open, I'd love to get another critique on my short story!

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?p=156989#post156989

Thanks!

[Wig]

I guess my corner shop of critiques is back open! Request them here otherwise I will choose what ones I want.

Check out my list here (http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?p=147917#post147917).

[Crazyangel]

I just posted the first chapter of my novel: The Wanderer. If you're not too busy would you be able to take a look at it please?

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=9729

Thanks

[cynicrylle]

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?p=157207#post157207

my fantasy novel "dancing macabre" they don't literally dance.
dancing makes some people happy sometimes and even in a huge massacre
some of the inhuman characters there are just enjoying the show. comical sociopathy and romance involved.

thanks in advance :D

[severne]

Hello!

It would be so great if you could take a look at this here. I have two versions of Part 1, but I am curious to know what people think of what I already have. I know it's a bit of a read, but I'll be so thankful forever.

Here is the link
http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?t=9832

~Severne~

[Mclark7838]

Just throw them at me. I'll do anything you ask me to except for lyrics. I can't critique lyrics.

Will you crit either my poem "The Road to Nowhere" or "How it Goes" for me?

Maybe both?

Thanks!

[Ransom Rhymer]

http://www.youngwritersonline.net/showthread.php?p=165686#post165686

Could you crit this poem for me please?