Need a critique?

[GeorgeMichael]

If anyone would like a critique feel free to ask me and I'll do my best to quickly (I have nothing to do but write and read on this vacation) get to your story. I love reading all types of stories be it fantasy or realistic but please don't ask me to critique poetry. I would love to read it but I can't say that I would be able to give a very worthy critique on it.

[SugarInkling]

Hello!

If you could actually critique my story "Kirsten in Wonderland" that would be awesome. I posted it yesterday and can't wait to get feedback! Please and thank you! :)

Write on!
-SugarInkling